Reviews for Which Feed Among the Lilies |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aside from that brief weird thing with the brackets and italics, everything else is just perfect. |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this fic! It's always awesome to read well written stories exploring the relationship between Fang and Vanille, And you achieved in a very organic way keeping everyone in character to boot. I hope you continue to write about these two ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww... that's such a good story that it made me want to cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one is even better than the first I read: I love the desperation and Fang's *pain* that she can't make Vanille safe. The dynamic between them in this is perfect, and I could hear their voices. When I hear the characters' voices in my head, it's a good fic. And of course, sensual. I know I've read and enjoyed your stuff before - it's good to rediscover it. |
![]() ![]() Nice fanfic!But what if Lightning got suspicious about them and then follows they start going all the way with Lightning watching not to they're suspicition! |
![]() ![]() Really great story. Hopefully you will write more! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() not bad, hope you write more FF XIII fics bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, that was so sweet and so very smexy. Very well described and not just the sex. But even about how Vanille liked to run simply to run. It was a small thing to add but it seems to add so very much to the story. This was really super adorable, I really wish they had gotten some more alone time in the game so we could have seen more bonding... because I doubt Square Enix would give us the full on smexy that you did lol. Thanks for the story! |