very cool so far. keep it up.

Great story. Please update soon.

When are you going to update this story again. It has been over a year now. Hope you didn't discontinue it.

You truley are an evil person. I want more story. You are really good at describing emotions. Keep going.

hey are you going to keep going? well please do cuz this is a GREAT fic! great plot and well really great! keep going!

do you plan to continue with this delectable story? PLEASE!

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wow! u have to write summore.. i really, really am dying to noe whats gonna happen.

hiya! i wish you would update! i love this fic. it was going great, until you stopped writing. keep up the good work for all of us fanfic crazed people please?

Keep on going i love it keep the story going dont stop!

Amazing so far, & I can't wait to read more!

Yay! It's been forever since I have been on this site! I missed reading! Now don't leave me hanging and keep writing :)

loved it , sorry for my very very late review, I'm been super busy and this is the first I've had a chance to read this

Darien should spend more time with Serena! Not have her go thru training! Keep up the good work.

This story is very intriguing, please update soon!