Reviews for Rise, Rebel, Resist
ObsidianDraconis chapter 8 . 9/8/2018
Hmmmm so Bella basically tells Edward and Alice if they come back again they’re dead and Edward is all resigned and “we know”? What’s up with that? I wonder how much of what’s happened to those two is because of their own personal desires and personalities and how much is Chelsea. Did she even have to work her mojo?
ObsidianDraconis chapter 7 . 9/8/2018
Alice and Edward are disgusting. So they have a little game up their sleeves do they? Just wait until Edward sees what he’s wraught. I’m getting major manipulation vibes from Marcus.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 5 . 9/8/2018
I’m a little sad that it seems Jake and his pack were essentially cast out, though I get it. I always felt it should have happened that way in canon. Two packs, two alphas, more than likely as some point two differing opinions on certai things. It could all actually become dangerous. Alpha against alpha. Separating them like that is probably for the best.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 4 . 9/8/2018
Ok so that sort of answered my first question about dates. Edward is an idiot, always assuming he knows everything. It’s so annoying. Hence my desire to love Bellsper and say fuck Edward. ;)
ObsidianDraconis chapter 2 . 9/8/2018
I’m finding this pretty interesting so far. I am hoping though that my question is answered later. In case it isn’t I was wondering. You said everything happened in BD. So the gathering of covens to show proof that Renesmee wasn’t a threat happened? I’m asking because of two reasons. The first is that Jasper said that he hadn’t seen Peter and Charlotte since just after Edward met Bella but they did come when called in BD. So he would have seen them then. The second reason is because I’m wondering just what the Cullens did to have this happen. Was it Renesmee? Or did Aro just feel they were getting to large and decide to act? Which goes against canon in a way. I’m just curious. I’m one of those types that ponders too much. Lol. Always love when Major Jasper Whitlock comes to the fore. His brain intrigues me. I love to see what he’ll come up with. I also hope to see just what it was Alice showed Edward. The coward.
girlie18 chapter 21 . 4/19/2018
awesome Queen of the Damned quote!
Tommy14 chapter 26 . 11/1/2017
Loved reading this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Guest chapter 26 . 9/7/2017
Brilliant!
celajwhitney chapter 26 . 6/6/2017
great story! very entertaining!
celajwhitney chapter 13 . 6/6/2017
the currency in italy is the euro dollar. the only country that isn't using it is britain which still uses pound notes.
celajwhitney chapter 7 . 6/6/2017
edward and jane? after she tortured him when bella came for him? does he enjoy pain? he must be a real pussy submissive.
landapanda chapter 26 . 5/24/2017
If you owned Twilight it would have been a much better story. ;) Excellent work here, thank you for sharing it with us all! You have great pacing. Time passes at a believable rate, non existent of this deciding to take down the Volturi and then completing the task within a week, you show us everything we need to know, don't get bogged down in trivialities, but don't jump over things we'd like to see. The characters grow over the course of the story in realistic and organic ways. I loved your distinction that finding a mate binds them together but doesn't make them instantly in love, generally, you can't truly love someone you don't know.

All in all, I loved this! Thank you!
landapanda chapter 15 . 5/24/2017
Love, love, love this! I'd say more, but I have reading to do. Great twist with the bonds.
orchidluv chapter 26 . 1/24/2017
Perfect. Beautiful. Entertaining! Not even made out to be too out of this world. Well, the fiction world anyway haha. Thank you!
orchidluv chapter 8 . 1/23/2017
*sigh* It's really a shame Bella thinks of the wolves as her kids since they're all physically around the same age. Some good lovin's would've been good while she got her shit straight with Jas
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