So sad and yet so beautiful

sweethart please that was one of the best oneshots i have read in awhile. too bad it can't be a story cause it has the makings of one. i always think it's a good way if someone is writing for the first time or if it's been awhile to start off with oneshots. i enjoyed it dear thank you.

;-; I need more please. It can't just end like that...;-;

Own, it is you as beautifull as it is sad, you did justice to the images that inspired the story *-*

What happened in the end... Does kagome flicker back into that obscure dimensional pocket or did she finally die or evanescent into inexistence.
Intrigued to bewilderment,
Yira

This was Beautifully Heart Breaking!

This is beautiful. All your hard work surely paid off because you truly captured the mood of the photos perfectly.

I think you should turn this one shot into a story, it is a gppd concept and would be a wonderful read

Whoa. So enticing!

How you describe the flow of story slowly. Your effort are paid! This is so lovely! Such one moment in long description; and quite detailed. I like how you divide the paragraphs. Just on the right rows, not too long, not too short. I disliked long paragraphs XD

Thank you, Author-san.
For the story you put your effort in. So well done! :')

Holy crap. This actually made me tear up and nearly start crying. Not a lot of short stories can do that either. I absolutely loved this without a doubt.

Absolutely beautiful! Only one chapter, but holding so much. The writing style flows, and the vocabulary is diverse. The basic plot has been used many times - a demonic lord and a human girl - but the way the story jumps from present to past makes the entire piece alive. I love the attention to detail, such as Tabitha's dress and the name of the piece being played. I know this story was published quite a while ago, but it's an excellent accomplishment and I just wanted to tell you that. :)

EbonyEye

I loved it! So bittersweet but so romantic at the same time!

(ow, love it

It was sadly beautiful...i immensely enjoyed. It's an A class piece of literature I assure you. You are a wonderful writer.

loooooooooooooooooooooooove it, even though i read it b4