Capturing complete unknowing is hard but you somehow did it. "One" is so perfect. More please.

I was browsing around for something different and stumbled across this great story. I love the vignette format, each character has a moment to shine. The writing is crisp and I enjoy that most of the characters have a distinct voice. The concept of the control group is a very different way to go about a Dark City fic, and I was very impressed by this piece.

I've already said this on eljay, but WOW. What a great piece, and thank you again.