WHAT!? No Spock/Kirk time!? You got my hopes up. But don't get mad, I love this fic! Those last few chapters had me I tears. Seeing the movie realm helps you to see the images in your mind. The actions of the characters. Awesome! Thanks for sharing. I have to find more!

And now I am trying not to bawl my eyes out. This is one of the best stories ever. Loved it!

I was unsure about reading this story as I wasn't sure about a Jim Kirk raised by Nero and company but decided to chance it. I am so glad I did. This was a very interesting tale that I truly enjoyed. The final chapter was especially soulful. The ending was so sweet and perfect. Thank you for your time and talent you put into this. Kudos.

This is actually one of my favourite fics! I loved everything about it! Even if I didn't get as much smut as I was hoping for, even the smidgen of it was fantastic and well appreciated! I really hope you'll make a sequel or just a companion piece of baby Ayel and Jim. Can't wait to read all your fics! Thanks for writing!

I've read this story close to what feels like a million times, and I love it just as much each and every time I go through it. You perfectly blended the movie with your own plot, and wrote everyone very in character, and it's just such an incredible story. Thank you so much for writing this, and especially thank you for giving us a happy ending

That was so good, you had me crying at the end. The whole "you are meant for greatness. Of this I am certain" perfect way to end the story.

This was an incredibly beautiful story. I don't know what more to say as tears of great emotion run down my cheeks.

I am having strong flashbacks to Wizard of Oz here. Jim is like Dorothy collecting friends to see the Wizard. Love it.

Thoroughly enjoyed it. Wish you had a sequal up

That was just so beautiful! Like instant tears at the end! Amazing job!

this was a very heavy story...i cried when Ayel died but now im happy that he gets to be part of this worlds Ayel

i actually like Ayel here...hes awesome...but Nero is still a giant pain in the crack and a total asswipe

This was an interesting AU, keep up the good work

A wonderfully complex and original plot. Your handling of the canon characters in your own reality was masterly, and I really liked the way you twisted original plotlines. With a little tweaking and a lot of editing (role is not roll, pus is not puss and apart is very different in meaning from a part)this would be one of the more interesting & original ST fanfictions.

This story was soooo good! OMG I love it! I hope you decide to do a sequel and see Spock and Kirk's relationship flourish with Ayel!