| Reviews for XMen: The Succubus |
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  Guest chapter 12 . 10/27/2018 Honestly, you have a good plot and writing style that you should bot let others opinions change for you but, this story just went in a direction I am not comfortable with. Sorry. Just don't be discouraged for I believe you are a very good writer. |
 Mashrose chapter 7 . 7/7/2018 THE X-MEN CAN'T JUST GO TO ANOTHER COUNTRY AND SEDATE AND KIDNAP SOMEONE BECAUSE HE WAS MAKING PEOPLE EXHAUSTED! THAT'S ILLEGAL! AND THE STUPIDEST THING I'VE EVER HEARD! I CAN'T BELIEVE I ACTUALLY THOUGHT THIS WOULD BE A GOOD STORY! |
| GhettoZorcress chapter 1 . 9/11/2017 Boo this succ, Harry/Hayden wasn't even in most of the story |
| AnimeGirl45xoxo chapter 8 . 1/15/2017 Mpreg? Seems like an interesting story, but it's not for me. |
| AnimeBook's chapter 12 . 4/17/2016 I'm definitely liking this so far. my only question is why do you keep referring to Harry as Paramore? cuz I've looked up the definition for it and it honestly just made me more confused. |
| ruinedsandwich chapter 11 . 3/23/2016 WTF |
| LunarisDraconis chapter 8 . 10/15/2015 this all seems like a serious invasion of privacy. if i was harry id be seriously pissed off at them |
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/6/2015 Write more please |
| Jess-love95 chapter 17 . 7/2/2014 Hey ! I read all of yout story in one go and can't wait for you to write the second arc D It is really a great story, full of feelings, very well written, I love Harry's relationship with everyone : Logan, Bobby... I'm feeling bad for Logan though, because he was always watching his brother and Harry from afar, and now Harry is with Bobby in this way... Doesn't Logan feel lonely like this ? :( Bobby is so adorable and caring ! I love him D And I like the fact that Rogue isn't mad at Harry for making (involuntary) Logan and Bobby distancing themselves from her. I don't like Jean in this... But I love Scott D |
| blackbloodywolf chapter 16 . 12/23/2013 interesting |
| nostalgiaghoul chapter 12 . 12/22/2013 dont tell me its goin to be bobby/harry? aw man shite |
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/4/2013 Has I reading this, I was like what happens next ? I got to part 17 and I saw this Info instead and I was like what where's the rest of it ! But I am glad that you going to do a past history about Harry, Logan and Victor has it will make it easy to know what's going off ! Until than I hope you keep up the good work ! The Crimson Mage. |
| Kayamve chapter 17 . 8/4/2013 Hope to see more of your work soon :) |
| Melodien chapter 17 . 8/4/2013 I'm excited to see the new chapthers, as you have done extremely well in this one _ |
| Dema chapter 16 . 6/17/2013 i heart this story please please update:) |
