Great story!

I like you made Jennifer be nice and not a carbon copy of Humbert's mom.

I loved this story! It was what the Phantom of the Opera could have been! SO much better!thank you!

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what happened to Haru, Baron, and Maria

Josh Groban is a PERFECT Baron singing voice! I love his songs!

I'm not going to lie, I had a really hard time reading this story. You put two Barons in the story and made it clear that one of them was going to get his heart broken! But even though it's not one of my favorites, I think from a writing and character development perspective this is one of your best pieces.

I love the Repo bit in the prior chapter! and love this sooo much so cute!

First of all I just want to say: Brava on one of the most well written pieces I've read. I love the way you told one story while telling two parts at different times. I also love how you tied everything together. You gave me many a surprise during this wonderful read. The way you told the story, with the perfect foreshadowing in it,I could almost predict what might happen, and yet no matter how close I was Too actually guessing correctly, you would put the most perfect twist to it. That twist would make me have to stop reading it and reflect on the words. I've had to do that many a times within your book, and I don't plan on forgetting this world you so beautifully have created. Thank you.
xxXxx ooOoo aAa

They didn't use the song because it wasn't in the original musical which is SOOO much better btw.

Whoa whoa whoa, ur a Gerard Pham. Nope the musicals way way WAY better then the movie. Ramin and Sierra all the way.

Ok I'm just wondering but is her name Japanese or something. And if it is why did you choose it?

I love the Phantom of the Opera so that spiked the story's appeal. It was great. I'm not saying it wouldn't have been great without the Phantom of the Opera theme because it would have been amazing no matter what. I enjoyed it very much.

Aaawww. Im glad Baron and Haru are finally married and together. And his mother is also happy too. :) same for Humbert.

Im confused big time. I figured that the phantom is Baron but there's the cat called Baron and now the Patron who has the name but with dark hair but asked to be called Humbert. Really confused.

I accidently post my review to chapter 1. when I meant to comment the latest chapter. :P