More Mudshipping stories like this! Please... This was so funny and much too short keep going

It's times like these when I'm moved to stop, think deeply, draw upon the celestial muses of the greatest writers of human literary history, and wed their thoughts to my hand as I carefully review the work before me. Ah; I have it! Prepare yourself. Ready? *ahem* ...I lol'd. :P

nice, you are good actually ivan uses mind read on me twice a day and sheba does it once

sheba: how?

ivan: when i do it i make sure my mind is silent

yeah, but her's isn't

sheba: why you pervert!

chill babe, i only do it to confuse you not blackmail!

sheba: -_-' sorry

it's okay, i'll get you some ice cream later

anywho, Muddshipping all the way and isaacXhama?

isaac: !

no, i don't think your a traitor to your own ship and i'll let you on a little secret if you haven't played dark dawn yet:

matthew is isaac and...

(i am hating this...)

jenna's son

(if you read this i am as much pissed off as you will be when you read this)

had to share that with you bye!

This was a very cute story, nicely written, and nowhere near the usual "thin plot, SMUT SMUT SMUT". I was reminded of Golden Sun today, thinking about the third installment and I had the urge to read a fanfic. It was nice the first one I read was so adorable.

I couldn't log into my account, but I wanted to review. You make me like Issac even more than I already did. He really came off as a sweet and innocent boy with his first love. My favorite part was when he was trying to explain the past night to Mia.

Thank you for that sweetness!

Despite the incessant nattering of our two favorite wind adepts, I would be more than happy to leave a review. I have to say, you're a good introduction into the world of Golden Sun fanfiction, and I"m looking forward to reading more of your fics. I think I'll call myself a Mudshipper for now. Oh, I like the way you portrayed the characters, by the way. It did feel a bit different, but then, isn't that expected when people are just starting to acclimate to their own feelings?

And Ivan, Sheba, natter only as necessary. Too much, and the lovely author won't want to write any more. If that happens, I'll be forced to sick Charon on you )

Look forward to more. Good Job and Good Luck

Bragi

I love your work. Finally a good wellwritten mudshipping. Please continue to write more of mudshipping. :)

Oh gosh, this was just adorable. ahhhh

wow you got that awkward tension between Isaac and Mia so perfectly. Everything was so fluffy and sweet man, just had me giggling like the fangirl I am LOL. And I looove the interaction between Garet and Ivan. They are hilarious! and the djinn! Isaac using Flint as a projective - ha! anyways, I would love if you would write more mudshipping/GS stuff!

Awesome! I love the Ivan-Garret relationship. And I certainly don't mind any of the OOCness, as it was done so well. If you plan on something being a oneshot, and it turns out longer, than make it a full story. No need to be restricted by your own rules. X3

I loved the ending! And if you DO make 'the' fic, keep the personalities as close to this as you can!

I will be waiting. :3

Such a bold move! Cheers for Isaac! Squee x9 Is this the end? Hmm, you should write some more, since this last chapter it's kinda.. off the hook. Just a suggestion though xP

Garet is very amusing, and so is Ivan. I think you represented them very well. Although... you might want to use italics or bold rather than caps all the time. Otherwise, this is an excellent story! I read your other one (and reviewed it) and even though the shipping is... well, different... it's still very well written, especially your portrayal of the Djinn. Thanks for writing these! I like 'em!

I come back from being a strictly M fic reader ( _ _ ), and this is what I find. I am pleased. :3

MOAR PLZ

(Now for the actual REVIEW part. I can't really complain about anything. Excellent grammar, good spelling. Loved the humorous bits! I had to read that "...! You little bastard!" part over and over. XD I would love it if you did an EPIC fic that did the Golden Sun story from the beginning. (Or at least from the part where Garet and Isaac leave Vale.) Please make more, I'll be watching!)

So cute! xD Rawr for Mudshipping! Although I kinda wondered if Ivan and Garet wouldn't throw up another fight -or pillow fight- when they've to share rooms, heheheh. Such a comical duo. I look forward for another chapter!