Come back!

COOL!

i am absolutely in love with your story and i hope you update soon

Loved it D:

oooh love it! poor darrens all drrained and ooood! can't wait for updates!

This is brilliant! I dont see any mistakes!

Hope to see lots more of Steve and Darren! :D

Update soon! :D

And yes! you writing a one-shot is an awsome idea! :D

Darren seems to be losing half of his personality I hope to can become his old self again not human but still a vampire.

Happy you updates! Update Soon

So great! I love the Bonds series so much. It's complex, if not confusing.

No grammatical errors as far as I can see. Do you have a beta reader? It's excellent!

My one turn-off is the paragraph lengths. Describing fight scenes in one paragraph is fine, if not pushing it. Every time there's a new speaker, a new paragraph should be started with few if not any actions or descriptions outside of the speaker. After the speakers dialogue, a new paragraph should usually be started.

Thank you so much for uploading this chapter, I hope you can upload more soon. :D

teh plot thickens again...yeah bourdic to the rescue! cue theme music lol

I sorta feel bad for steve right here even though he's a complete nutcase! haha and the baby eating scary...i just lurv the way you write!

It's great you got to writing the second part!:) Update Soon

Huzzah~! *jumps up in the air happily*

Excellent job my friend~! :3 I can't wait to read more~! :D

Thank you so much for uploading the squeal it was really good, and I just can't wait to see more of Darren/steve keep up the good work.