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24QueenMo chapter 10 . 8/21/2010 Ah! I'm sorry I missed reviewing this last chapter. I was busy, but I'm reviewing now! :) Aw, Sonny's (hopefully) safe and happy. It gives me the warm and fuzzy feeling inside. I love that feeling. If my dad tried to kill me and/or ruin my life, I would probably never want to see him again. "'Or he could become a notorious mass murderer,' Zora said darkly." Best line ever. That totally sounds like Zora. I always say stuff like that, and my family is creeped out. I don't know why, though . . . Anyway, this was a fabulous story. It had a good plot and was very well written. I wish to see more of you in the future. :) |
minithepeanut chapter 1 . 8/17/2010 Here have some electronic hugs and cookies. I loved it, yet so confused...Oh well I should just keep reading. |
ChocoLalaLandGirl chapter 10 . 8/15/2010 Omg! Ur story was so awesome! I luved it soo much! But i dont get the ending...o wel. It was still good! :D |
IMaGUMMYbear chapter 10 . 8/11/2010 Haha. Funny ending. Its 11:33 pm and i read this in less than an hour. I'm reviewing for all the chapters. I this! I think that my fav chapter is 8(Sorry if its the same chapter as the funeral. I dont remember. sorry). And the saddest chapter is The funeral. I got all choked up! Anyways, i love this, and Sonny's dad is a phsyco. So is the waiter. |
Laura chapter 10 . 8/9/2010 You are a freakin' genius! I am amazed at how developed your plot was and you are an excelent writer! keep it up! |
Marchlo101 chapter 10 . 8/8/2010 I loved this story!Haha I loved that last like i was cracking up! |
Geekquality chapter 10 . 8/8/2010 awwww this is a cute ending! ;D |
XxSmashingPandasxX chapter 10 . 8/7/2010 Wooow. This was awesome. xD Murphy's a dork. Lol. |
Nicolette8dancerluv chapter 10 . 8/7/2010 Ik I just commented but I had to add I loved this story...tho I do have to agree Chad was materialistic at the end. And I do think sonny would have ignored the Chef and gone along with her life. But I like how you made it. And how in the end u added how she wanted her mom to go. And if someone steals this story, since that's been ahppening a lot, I would definantly say who it belongs to bc it dwarves that. Nice work |
Lady-Apricotxx chapter 10 . 8/7/2010 this story was awesome :D i'm just confused about why sonny went along with it. loved the story |
milieumarch chapter 10 . 8/7/2010 I know you'll see me next story. Okay, so I have to admit that I don't like epilogue chapters much, so this was nowhere near my favorite chapter. I did like that their kisses kept getting interrupted. Chad was kind of weird in this chapter. And not good weird. He was a little . . . materialistic and stuff. I would have thought he would've changed. The rest is really sweet. I loved the part in which Sonny told her mom to get out of the house. My favorite part of Falling for the Falls was "Mom, go watch Mackenzie Falls. In your room!" It was hilarious. You wrote a very intriguing tale. Please continue to write other stories! The Joker Strikes Again! |
Allisonfan.-12345 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010 Omg! This story is amazing! I finaly got an account on here and I fianlly get to review! I can't wait to read the final chapter! And I'm praying it's not depressing. |
Geekquality chapter 9 . 7/31/2010 omg. this was awesome! |
24QueenMo chapter 9 . 7/31/2010 YAY! Happy ending! (It better be that way in the last chapter, too.) I kind of figured out when Bradly said "you know my last name" it was Sonny's dad. And I really don't care if he dies, either. Be gone! And that Johnson guy, too. I really don't care what happens to him...I just don't want him to hurt and/or kill Sonny and/or Chad. Wow, I said and/or in the sentence twice. LOL I just want to say I love your avatar thing. I love "The Office" almost as much as I love SWAC! I have every season's DVD and have season six recorded on my family's DVR (execpt the episode "New Leads" where your picture is from). Well, great job and update soon! PS How's the song "You Are My Shortstack" coming along? |
LOLChanny819 chapter 4 . 7/31/2010 I'm sorry I missed some chapters. I was going to wait to finish this until it was complete, but decided that I wanted to read it now. So here I am! I loved this! But somehow, I thought Chad would be a little more miserable, like, not wanting to talk to anyone. And Grady too. Maybe they figure that if they dont show the pain and just go on with life, it'll be like it never happened, and the pain will go away. Aww. Poor them...SMILES! LOL |