Beautiful. I don't think there's any other word that better describes this. It would be lovely if it continued, but it stands well as it is.

Terrific, wonderful, lovely, great writing!

Beautifully written and way too short:). You captured their characters perfectly. I wish all your stories were in a book I could buy and keep. Thank you. Please keep writing.

Great story and chapters. Please continue

This is such amazing fanfiction. You captured all the characters so well. This is the first story I have ever read where I would pay money to see it completed. It is that good. Thank you so much!

I came back to reread this. It is still beautiful and emotional. Thank you.

Okay, all caught up now. I really love this. There's a beautiful rhythm to Delenn's narrative, and it easily fits into the themes of the show.

Wow, I'm just blown away by this. The level of detail is fantastic - the way the changes would feel, the emotional turmoil. And the characters' voices are perfect. I can easily hear them as I read.

I love your stories, Babylon 5 is one of my favorites tv shows ever, I watched in the 90's for the very first time and a million times after that.
I think you got absolutely the personalities of the characters, I really love specially your Ivanova and Sheridan (I just love the little voice inside the John's head) and Delenn of course.
... anyway a lot of thanks for update and share your writing with us.
Paulina :)

Oh my gracious, you pull at my heart strings. I love the relationship between the two of them that you are showing us here. I love the human shop keeper helping out Delenn too. The actions in your fic speak so loudly. I'm so glad I discovered this today, but sad that it isn't longer. Thank you.

This is wonderful. I find DeLenn's perspective so very interesting. I also like her burgeoning relationship with Sheridan. I'm looking forward to her getting help from Ivanova.

I know, I know. I'm ages late on this story, but I keep coming back to it! Wonderful!

I'm thrilled you've taken this up again. My favorite B5 fanfic; I keep coming back to it. Thank you!

I was immensely happy to get the notification that this fic had been updated after years of inactivity! And what a chapter. The Markab episode is so intense, so incredible, and your writing only made it even more so.

Delenn's characterization in this fic has to be one of the best ones I've ever read, as is John's. I love the fact that their relationship is so strong, and so important to both of them even this early in the show.

Please, keep writing, it's one of my favourite Delenn-centric fics!

This is a good story. id' love to read more of things from her or his perspective, but seeing as the last post was several years ago it seems unlikely, anyway I really enjoyed this story. I found no spelling errors or anything annoying like that, and I also rather enjoyed being able to know what was on her mind as she went about events just before or after and during the moments of the show. Its always interesting to see a scene from another perspective. Keep writing!