Oooh - I like this one exactly how you ended it. Nice job!

Man that was some crazy shite you pulled there o.O
But thank goodness you did not kill them all off!

Good read. Moving and you captured the horrific nature of fear and the drive to survive.

Their saved! Yay! :)

WOW! I was riveted. Truly. I hung on every word. This is awesome, and I can honestly say I've never read anything like it. Thank you. xo

Great story!

Hi, I am so glad that you let them all survive. Tim's voice was very clear and true. I could feel along with him. I'm glad he found his resolve. Tony and Gibbs were described so well too. Thank you!

I'd'a loved to read that epilogue, but c'est la vie, I reckon! The Tim PoV for this story is great, and I love seeing Gibbs from McGee's perspective. Semper Fi indeed.

Loved it!

At least they were found.

I was a bit worried with Tim and his thoughts and dreams.

This was really good. Hope you come back for an epilogue at some point.

You know I read this story a few times now, and it's a great story. But I would have liked to think that Ziva had something to do with finding their location. I imagine her braking Harrison within moments of entering the interrogation room.

Also there must be something mentioned of the fact that Gibbs went so long without his coffee.

I hope you find more inspiration to do an epilogue.

Again, great story

I would desperately, DESPERATELY love to read the epilogue :)

This was spectacular and you kept everyone in character really well.

Really graphic story and extremely well written. I felt everything all three men were going through in this piece, especially Tim obviously. Really great fic! :) x

Boss I'm wounded! Haha so funny. But seriously. Great story. You captured the characters and the scenario perfectly. Props to you