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Amazing story. Thank you for the read

I’m sure I’m not the only one who gets ... THAT way ... about the Mankeys. Aarrrrrgggghhhhh! You did too good of a job making them disgusting human (human?) beings.

Oh, so that's what happenef to Josh . . .

I'm kind of glad you were nicer to him in The Hunter. :-)

Bye, bye Mankeys. Sniff, sniff . . . not!

No description of how Josh got his, though. I guess I'll have to use my imagination. :-)

Heh. "baka."

I was going to wait to post a review until I finished the story (again), but I couldn't wait.

Why do I always feel like I have to take a long shower after I read a section about the Mankeys? Ewwww . . .

Awesome story! Excellent writing - the story line flows very well! Lots of action and drama but great interludes as well. The characters both (old and new) were developed and portrayed very well. I do like the mature Ron very much. I'm glad he finally got the recognition that he deserved. Definite favorite! Keep up the great writing.

Looking forward to enjoying The Hunter
- Drakonis Aurous

hey Sgt,
nice way to end this story. now with that over are you going to write the one with the twin girls in it. i know you got a few one shot out with it so there be fun to read so when do plain on writting it?

just asking

AJW1970

Yes, I'm sure most everybody caught the George Takei reference.

One thing tho. Search for "lemmings" in Wikipedia. The little guys going over the cliff in a mass suicide is a myth created by DISNEY! One of their wildlife adventure shows in the 50's or 60's started it all. True fact!

Paul

After seeing the Fukushima clones, I hope the Mankey clan isn't smart enough to think about cloning themselves and letting the clones get captured or killed. That would lead to a whole nother arc. I'm surprised that Josh and Amy hadn't thought about it... Yet!

Paul

I love CB's comments but I think he missed one when Justine and Mike were in the shower. They washed each other's backs but it took Justine a half hour to finish because Mike is so big.

Paul

You know you played a little loose and free with the law when Hobble served the annulment papers. When the Mankey's drew their guns, it's called brandishing a weapon and some of them could've been arrested by simply having them, being convicted felons. Convicted felons can not own or possess firearms and brandishing a gun at a law enforcement officer is also a felony. There's also the fact that some of the weapons were concealed. I'm pretty sure that the Mankeys couldn't get a concealed permit. They're usually only given out to people who have a valid reason for one.

Of course the Manky clan believes they're above the law, but Sgt Hobble had the right to arrest them on the spot.

Okay, that's out of my system, sorry about the rant. I used to work armed security in Los Angeles so I know a little about the law.

Anyway, nice story. I hope the main part of the plot doesn't go down during Xmas but you said Josh and Amy want to attack while Ron is at the War College so Xmas is saved once again. (Oh that's right. Drakken didn't want to steal Xmas.)

Paul

You mean Josh and Amy aren't going to call it a Fuku-rilla?

Paul

another quick question. If the Mankey clan is so arrogent and feel that they're above the law, why aren't they all in jail or prison? Or are they all too ugly to have been arrested?

Paul