| Reviews for Melt |
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Guest chapter 24 . 8/4/2019 Sorry, but this isbullshit. No way in hell would a wolf go after his pack brothers imprint. |
piglet873 chapter 13 . 8/16/2018 Ina is getting on my last nerve to be honest. |
dialoona chapter 1 . 4/20/2018 I love this story ! I couldn’t put it down , it’s officially the best one out of all the ones I read about Jacob and his imprint and I have read A LOT these past few days . It didn’t feel like a fanfic to me and in my mind I’d like to think that this is what happened to Jake after Bella. I hate the fact that in the books he imprinted on Bella’s daughter ...ugggh it’s just so dumb .. but I love this story and how you portrayed the characters. I don’t know how many Fics I have started and thought they were good only to be disappointed because the characters were frustrating and jokes kept on being repeated or it got overly sappy and really weird , real fast . BUT THIS ! This , didn’t disappoint from start to finish . So in my head , this county’s as cannon now ! |
sham caster chapter 11 . 3/19/2018 What a fucking bitch! |
Wednesday Nugget chapter 24 . 8/21/2017 This is my millionth time reading this since you posted it and every time I read I'm in awe of how wonderful it is. I know its been a while since you've even looked at it, but personally, its my favourite. Just thought I should let you know. |
Nameless chapter 24 . 7/3/2017 Please please please. I really enjoyed this story. |
fangirl0012345 chapter 24 . 6/23/2017 Idk if you're still planning on doing the rewrite(or if you already have; I'm about to check your profile), but if not, I'd love to see it. This story was amazing, and I'm so sad that it's over. |
GBear chapter 2 . 5/7/2017 IM DEAD. THIS IS... INDESCIBABLY FUNNY! "he wiggled his eye brows 'Things." that was the funniest part, wait no, the funniest part was jake busting open the door. |
Wow chapter 10 . 4/5/2017 Paul just sexually assaulted her and would have raped her if Jacob hadn't of stepped in. And she is healing him and getting mad when Jacob tells Paul to stay away from her. Man this chick is fucked up and the writer does not have an understanding of how serious something like that is and how it affects someone. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2016 THIS IS ONLY THE FIRST CHAPTER AND I'M ALREADY DEAD LMAO |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/12/2016 OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG...PLZ TELL ME THAT JUST NOT HAPPEND PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ! |
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 12 . 8/14/2016 I hate that Jacob forgave Ina so easily. She doesn't deserve it. |
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 11 . 8/14/2016 Not sure who I hate more in this story. Ina or Bella? Its hard to decide. |
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 10 . 8/14/2016 Ina is a horrible imprint. She reminds me of Bella. She is acting just like how Bella acted with Jacob. Its the Edward and Jacob triangle again. This chapter actually made me feel a little sick. |
French fan chapter 24 . 8/8/2016 Hi, I really want to thank you for this story, it was a pleasure to read it, I really love both Jake/Ina and Paul/Ina moments ! Ina isn't a perfect girl , she makes mistakes, and so it is really realistic, you go further than the stereotypes of thunderbolt between the imprits. |