Please do a continuation pls

I couldn't stop smiling as I read this. XD I thought Kurumu would be a bit.. madder. XD

PLEASE DEAR GAWD WRITE MOAR

Awesome. Love the plot.

ITS FUCKING AWESOME!

I just might take you up on that offer!?

That was epic, but please pretty please continue it!

Ciao Atlas

Man this was awsome but if she dose in up with a 34 yer old orc I wood kill

Please continue this! I love it!

I liked it a lot, it was very believable and the storyline was excellent. Especially for a one-shot. So may I write off of this? It is an excellent story.

Nice one shot, love Mizore/Tsukune

A nice fic you make... :D... You could be famous if you chose fic like Naruto or Harry Potter... Many people will recoganize your talent if you chose a popular fic like that... Nonetheless... You still good in my opinion... Keep up the good work _

This is really great, I love it

This is great stuff! I really enjoyed this.

I just love the Tsukune x Mizore pair to death!

As much as I love this pairing, and this story, I have to recommend something, and please don't take this the wrong way, I can't stress that enough;

you should really, REALLY use better synonyms for your lemon scenes. I like the way you write, but reading "dick" and "cock" and "pussy" and that sort of thing every line really takes away from the story's mood. At least for me, it does. This synonym-lack is a huge issue to me on FF.N

An author on this site whose lemons are just plain AMAZING is HetLemony, who writes a lot in FF7's CloudAerith pairings. Look some of that stuff up, it'll improve your stories' sensuality and mood like you wouldn't believe.