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Great Story! I love the suspense that you put in to the story. The dialogs are great, too!

I loved how you did the story nice gowing I love it

Are you giving up on the story?

Wow really Loved it. Waiting for more update

Pls update... this is a pretty good story

I love this story and miss updates. Please continue.

I can't wait for the next chapter

wait is this a Kyo/Misao or Shou/Misao? cuz if this is a Shou/Misao I ain't reading anymore

good

more!

Amazing, just amazing. With every chapter I can feel the tension, the romance, the heartbreak and it's all simply marvelous. Continue, ENCORE ENCORE! I LOVE IT! I have read the actual series and the way you capture Kyo and Misao is uncanny and so real please continue!

PLEASE UPDATE I"M GOING CRAZY I HAVE TO KNOW THE ENDING!

I really like it so far. It's a good story, and done well so far. The only thing I would suggest is that you work a little bit on your grammar. Even though I can still understand what you are trying to say, there are many times when some of the smaller words like 'there' and 'their' or stuff like that are not used in the correct context. (for example, there might be used in a place where it is actually supposed to be their.) Also there were a couple times when you had something like a 'present tense verb' when it should have been a 'past tense verb' in the context it was used in. Over all though I like it and think you are doing a great job. :)

wow this was all really good! Please put up the next part soon! )