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Guest chapter 1 . 2/19 I loved you fanfic! Please we want more... |
Aki Eschirott chapter 2 . 7/28/2012 Rawr. This is the second of your stories that I've read today. You're making me review too much dear, but oh well. I like how you write. You make your stories sound like poetry. It flows very well and the fluffiness is not overly sweet. I always like how you end your stories best. Your last lines always puts a smile on my face. haha! Good job on writing this piece. :) |
phiphi78 chapter 2 . 3/6/2011 so sweet ! |
Let Me Delete This Thing chapter 2 . 8/13/2010 Girl, ur nuts. This chapter was GREAT! Oh, how i love reading ur fictions, especially fluffy ones! Keep it up! |
Evil-Chibi-Tiffy chapter 2 . 8/13/2010 *SQUEAL* love dis story! its so sweet nd lovey-dovey! kaito/aoko 4evers! XD one of da best stories in dis archive! |
IndefiniteIntegral chapter 2 . 8/13/2010 Awwww... Wow... Now I'm feeling warmth in my chest and I can't stop smiling. It's not a maniacal laugh, just a simple smile, like... "They must look so cute together". It's a cute little story made form snapshots, with a hint of cute, little romance. Not too much just to feel the trace of flavour, but not to get oversweet... I like this part a lot! Really A LOT! And because I'm still under the impression of that story I can't write anything more coherent, sorry... |
nicknackel chapter 2 . 8/12/2010 Reading this just really made me smile. It's so in-character, and yet very, very unique and unlike other fics similar to this. I can totally see Kaito doing that. Also, the fact that Aoko's day went from 'no-good, dirty, rotten, bad, unlucky, horrible' to 'the very best White Day I ever had' made me grin. xD I love your writing style! So much voice in it, and it flows really well. Keep up the great work~ Kute-Katt |
IndefiniteIntegral chapter 1 . 8/9/2010 Aaahhh... You know, I'm writing this review for a four time, and every time I'm not satisfy. Okay, so let's try it another one. This story is really cute and romantic and full of warmth. The last thing comes from the very sensitive side of Kaito, the side we all know exists, but we can hardly ever see it. And you know that what really captured me was that Kaito wasn't thinking if he should or shouldn't buy a lover's chocolate for Aoko. It was that he was determined to buy it, because no matter how risky it was, it was worth to give it a try. This sentence: "But I'd rather face rejection than keep my feelings inside of me, until it's too late." got a big "aaaawwwwwww" from me and I just think that it's very much in Kaito style. I can't even describe how much effect this short little thing has on me. But I can write that I really, really like it and if you ever write an omake to that story (about Aoko's reaction for Kaito's White Day's gift) I will gladly read it. |
neonquincy1217 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010 awww... so cute. I love the part about the sushi shop owner, and that part about what he would always be willing to do for Aoko... Like! :3 |
Aujin20 chapter 1 . 7/14/2010 Contemplating |
Let Me Delete This Thing chapter 1 . 7/14/2010 awww, this was rather cute! I love the line about running away from the fish displays! It's also true that the people you care about are the hardest to read. I really liked it. Keep up the good work |
bubblyangel101 chapter 1 . 7/13/2010 how boring...I'm reviewing my own story...is that even possible? |