This was a great story. It (especially the pic of them switching their hairstyles) honestly reminds of the comic strip where Riley grew out his hair and actually did pretend to be Huey while still acting like Riley, causing poor Huey to get the blame for all the trouble he's caused. Them switching places would of definitely made a great episode.

That last scene was so cute!

I really liked the story! i was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Great job.

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First things first, I absolutely love the concept of your story it's interesting and kinda funny to read. Well Done. Yet here are some things that bother me. Remember Huey IS a "Domestic Terrorist" so at least give him SOME credit that he CAN indeed fight and use a gun. I mean during the paintball match he was totally owned by that girl, yet he can beat Bushido Brown? Also, I feel like your constricting his intelligence. He has the brain far more superior than a lot of grown ups. Another thing is with that girl Amy I think it went a little too fast but overall it was good.

Now for Riley with his character I think the way you petrayed his reluctance from kissing Jazmine and wanting to kiss her was just about spot on, yet a little shaky.

Overall feelings: Good Chapter

Amazing story!

Niggerific...nice word.

It was a little TMI moment with the bath but overall it was good.

Huey became a murderer :O! Dannng, this is getting intense!

Hahaha well, I got three words for Riley; 'Welcome to Puberty'!

Danggg...now Huey likes Amy too!

Woow...so Riley knew Huey was at the fair! Dang...I smell drama..

Woow...so Riley has feelings for Jazmine now :o? Hmm...curious to see how this will go!

Ahaha Huey got caught by the popo lol! For a minute, I thought there was gonna be a Huey/Cindy fluff in this chapter. Anyways...ouhhh I bet Huey's jealous :3! What a funny chapter :D!

Hahah Riley is so mean with Jazmine but it's cute how he defended her from those pervrrted scary dudes. Kudos to Riley for not being mean...for once lol. :) Even though I'm really a fan of Riley/Jazmine, I'm likin' this fluff...It's cute and adorable :)