I noticed a few spelling errors like, were and immediately. So next time you update you might want to check that the words are spelled correctly. or in the case of the were (i'm just guessing here) you accidentally tapped r twice so check for other things like that as well.

The story is getting more interesting that's for sure. I love how you did the .. parts. "I didn't know he was so.. strong." Although it seems more natural to have three dots instead of two.

This sounds really interesting! I hope you update soon.

wow i rly like the plot of the story and i cant wait to see what happens next XD