I’m guessing you lost inspiration on this piece. What a shame, it had a good start. I would have loved to see where you were going with shy Mark and your OC.

Omg pleasepleaseplease continue this, don't leave us hanging! I like it because it's unique, with a shy 'Taker and all. I REALLY want to see how this turns out. ;)

I wished you would of continue this story because its interesting and different from other 'taker fanfic. :)

Please hurry up and either update this story or finish it because I can't wait to see how Miss Isabeau's little seduction game turns out. This is a very intriguing story and I love it. Kudos on a job well done.

Hey there,

Just a short one here. I thoroughly enjoyed this first chapter, It was inventive, quite well written and i have to say that personally i love the direction you've gone in the sense of the man himself. I've read plenty of taker fics and written a few for my own personal satisfaction and i've noticed how most writers tend to carry Mark off as a bit of an arsehole and as far as i'm concerned he's a really nice guy so it seems you've gone for realism in that direction. (As far as i've read anyway)... So that's me. Good job with the first chapter. Desperate for more over here :P! Keep it coming!

Lulu

xx

i like write more :)

i love this story so far plz write another chapter P

I like it :D Hope you'll post next chapter soon!

Interesting, so far.