very very good! u should make this into a story because it would be very very interesting and worth while and i would love the crap outta u but u dont have to!

Sweet and cute, nice job

My heart can't take all these feels!

"Neither lead, neither followed, they walked down this new, odd path together."

Very nice addition, almost an ingenious line really. It made this story more...well, I honestly can't find the right adjective. I really like the plotline to this and how it played out in your story, it made this story all the more interesting to read.

Thank you for posting this story!

:)

Lovely narration style. _

Awesome little snippet. Short, but profound.

That was so cute!

loved it. _

Finally a rematch! I always had a feeling that Leo would want to reenact those moments in the roof top to see if he was "truly" beaten but the aftermath wasn't something i expected I hope u continue this fic i want to know exactly where this is headed and if Leo is taking this seriously because it seems hes just going along as not to hurt his lil bro cause if in that cause Raph is just going to stop any relationship between them update soon!

Lovely little story with a most awesome pairing! :D I loved how they both equally lead and followed the kiss, and how Leo put his hands on Raph's shoulders. Really cute. 3