cute story x3

Aww, how sweet! I love how Lance told her he loved her! That was just so adorable; it makes me smile!

This had such a nice flow to it. :)

A little spelling error; "I fell on the ice, at it hurts" should be "and it hurts". But a really adorable fic, especially the last few lines. "No, it's tomorrow"

/squee~

Awww such a kwaii ending! Great job~~

The cute! So cute.

This shipping is on my list of god-like things. (L)

"I fell on the ice, at it hurts" ...'and it hurts'?

"Oh, the cleverness of you." "Oh the cleverness of me."

That was very good!

Awesome! Another fav!

thanks a lot, and congrats. Kao

That was one of the most well written Lyra Lance stories I've ever seen. I hope you write more as this one was a joy to read!

Short, sweet, and absolutely beautiful. Thanks for the good read.

*You know,You post some of my favorite Fics' about some of my favorite parings. And I love you for that! 333

* I love the way you word things and space them. Even though this story was short it was really ... amazing.

* The ending was perfect. 3

** In some places there are some Grammar problems,minor ones. But no-one is perfect and I'm hardly a Grammar ninja myself. :P

Keep the amazing stories coming!

~Britty~

Ah, you posted the Lance/Kotone AND the Morty/Kotone! Yay, I decided to read this one first since L/K is my favorite couple…

‘“I love you.” She said it like she was stating a fact, the grass is green, the sky is blue, and my heart belongs to you.’

That’s just so pretty and such a wonderful starting line. I always struggle with what to write in the beginning of a new fic and this makes me utterly jealous. But still, it was gorgeous.

The last line had me smiling. So sweet, so very sweet. I adored it. Really, I wish I could come up with some of the stuff you spout out. But, nonetheless, you’ve definitely inspired me to get back into gear with working on my own Lance/Kotone fic!

As always, wonderful and beautiful and gorgeous. Keep on the good work, arisu.

-S.