Thank you for writing and the adventure.

Beautiful story. Thank you.

Wonderful. Have forgotten things. Will reread to get things together. More please.

I think the Doctor is a bit more unhinged than even Daniel.

It is a sad thing that Daniel has to bind the power of his children, does he not know of the "Shadow Proclamation" that the Doctor was speaking of, or does he know and is just taking extra precautions?

Poor Jack Carter, his whole world has been flipped and it is still spinning like a whirling dirvish.

Great Chapter

Lovely chapter. Very much worth the wait. Looking forward to more.

Awe, another little girl:) can't wait to hear the name. So happy to see this chapter!

Sorry that I didn't get to review sooner. RL has been kicking my butt:(. Loved getting to see Daniel w/the kids. Love the closeness of him and Sam. They so belonged together on SG1! Great work and I look forward to more

good story

I actually think it would be better if Cam got ahold of Daniel and had Daniel speak with Jonas and Carolyn...he is part of the issue because of the guild that Jonas harbors. Plus, Daniel is good at getting people, even Jack, to open up and talk. About the only one he can't get to open up is himself and that seems to be changing as well.

Is it merely the Doctor's presence that is causing Jo to remember, or something like the Tartus? Hopefully Jack is brought back into the fold and is able to come see his sister before she gives birth. Plus, Zoe can meet her Aunt and Uncle that she never knew about.

good story

So, Daniel is the origin of the "big bang"? Oh, there is so much room for Jack and company to tease him about that for eternity. I wonder what the other Ascended think of Daniel's problem solving skills? I hope that The Doctor is able to help Jack Carter out of his predicament and set things right, or to get him out of there and back with his sister...he could probably be of use at the SGC. The issue with the "Star" is going to be a toughy when you consider it is the source of Sam's capabilities, or at least a booster to them. Will they separate her out to go on her own way, or keep her and the threats that go along with her? How much of the Eternals and their realm exist after the destruction of the Pandorica?

Excellent.

Great Chapter