| Reviews for Kingdom Conversations |
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The Unplanner chapter 12 . 2/14/2013 I'm pretty sure there's a magic portal on the compass on the front page of the book. That's how you get out, after you get what you came for. |
MissRikulicious chapter 12 . 6/30/2012 I love every single one of these chapters! They made me giggle I think my favorite part in all of these chapters was when Pence said "Ahh! It groped me!" That part almost made me pee myself xD |
Infamousplot chapter 2 . 4/17/2011 Lol XD Hilarious already. Oh Axel, you are a pedo, even if you don't mean to be XD |
Pomegranata chapter 12 . 11/21/2010 It's been a month, here are some requests, write human! Write! Xion's death scene When Sora and Kairi are seperated Zexion scene in Chain of Memories and the scene when Roxas and Namine are united with Sora and Kairi (I want you to make Namine say something hopelessly romantic and have Roxas go on a rant about how they're technically twins- you know, being created at the same time from Sora's heart) Now write filthy human! Write! Dora, Dora, Dora the Explorer! Who's the super-cool explorer Dorer! Pooples I didn't enter this... Please ignore that! Help! The packaging robot is attacking! The cake is a lie! Help! They're burning me! Sicarax! Save me! This was a triumph, I'm making a note here, huge success -GLaDOS |
Sky's Breaker chapter 12 . 10/11/2010 Yays, okay, scene... um... either the Axel Saix scene from 358/2 days, or the scene when Roxas yells stop, and Axel, being the idiot he is, knocks out Xion. The first one most likely, please. |
Bokeh.Burn chapter 12 . 10/9/2010 LOL all of these were funny! Keep making more! Request:The scene between Riku,Kairiand Sora on the beach of Destiny Islands in KH 1 where Riku is saying aren't you forgetting about me and all that jazz lol |
QueenofAlices chapter 12 . 10/6/2010 hey! Awesome story! I have an idea. From kh2 when Goofy gets hit in the head with that rock. i think thats a good scene to bash. Thanks for writing! |
gstol1 chapter 12 . 10/4/2010 I got one for you from 358/2 Days. Axel and Roxas go up to the clock tower to have ice-cream like they usually do. Axel accidentally pushes Roxas off the clock tower. |
LobaLu chapter 12 . 10/4/2010 Thanks for updating! I love these things! :D I have a request: Please write one that illustrates how Sora REALLY felt about the musicals in Atlantica! Sebastian was so annoying, and Donald was a really, really bad singer. I think there's some promise there. :) |
mrl98 chapter 12 . 10/4/2010 OH YEA SORA! whooooo! awesome :D I have a request :) this may be a spoiler scene for 358/2 days, so tell readers. * * * * * * * Please, do ur version of Xion's death! it suckz crap in the game! thanks :) |
Omega Keyblade Wolf chapter 12 . 10/4/2010 Hn...well, I like this so far! Great job! Ummmm... Can you do the following scenes plz? Xion Dies is Roxas' Arms Namine tells Roxas he isnt supposed to exist Simba Sora vs Scar Sora meets Marluxia (when his hood is off) Thanks! |
Flightfoot chapter 12 . 10/4/2010 The Hundred Acre Woods world was... interesting. Hey, why don't you write about that cutscene in the first KH where Sora fought Riku and did his whole "my friends are my power" thing? I can't believe that he let Donald and Goofy off so easily for abandoning him! |
caitlinkeitorin chapter 12 . 10/4/2010 ehh, not ur best, but the end made me laugh XD i have actually forgotten how to get out of that book and was stuck there for like an hour o.o |
CU Administration chapter 1 . 9/5/2010 Your fic is in violation of the FF. Net Rules. Entries Not Allowed: -stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc. 6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries. You are not allowed to write an author's note as a chapter nor write in script form. I suggest taking down the first chapter and putting it on your page then making the fic into story form so ou have you basic idea and it's within the rules. Signed, DarkSacredJewelXoX [Critics United ] |
mrl98 chapter 11 . 8/26/2010 XD funny! hot pantz ooh lala! |