cant wait to get to tha part where panther gets his

Gettin good keep up the Excellant work. are you going to have Fox rescue Krystal and kill Panther Caruso for what he did along with Falco,katt,slippy,amanda,and peppy taking a shop at panther.

excellent story! luv da part bout da scar, m14, 2 glock, spas12 and $#!% load of ammo! :D

pretty good so far. can't wait for more.

can u update this soon, im w8ing foe fox to kill panther

Ahh, you did it again!

Very well done! :)

That was awesome! I could really feel the tension in some parts, and this is impressing! Goodjob! I also love the cursing in the story. :p

Pretty epic job on the ending! :)

Well, I figured it would be longer but regardless it is what it is, and for what it is it was enjoyable to see that you have given up on this story yet. I liked it, whether you put out more or not is your choice.

FINALLY, its about dang time you updated, I was beginning to think you wasn't gonna get back to this.

this... was... BEAUTIFULLY AMAZING :DDD GREAT COMEBACK CHAP

poor falco. you made Dmitri such a badass. however, you forgot add at the ending thatll he'll be in my story. no hard feelings, i forget too XD

-Cet

Again, good chapter, but for this chapter you could transition between dream sequences and realtime happenings, it was a little hard to follow along with the sequence where Fox somehow overheard the Panther/Krystal encounter.

In closing mi amigo, you have a truckload of potential to become a great writer, you just need to get better

Just gotta say, LOVED the first paragraph! Again, edit your chapters more intensely if you can, otherwise this'd be perfect

Again, good storyline, but still the spelling/capitalization issues persist

Oh wow. This is the first time I can actually say in six years of doing fanfiction that I can say that I did not see the car crash coming at all. And how often are car crashes used in SF fanfiction, let alone executed as awesomesly as this? Almost never I say.

You have a good concept going on here, but you do have some grammical issues, mostly capitalization and spelling, make sure to edit chapters more closely from now on.

AMAZING as ever

cant wait 4 the nxt chap

-Cet