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Sorry to be THAT person, but according to the books, Ron actually defended Hermione. He didn't insult her at all.

This is easliy my FAVORITE piece of harry potter fanfiction!

LMAO your obsession with Neville, and giving him a harem, shows what fat cocksucker you are. Hope you are happy sitting there while your mother gets it deep with many different flavor of men. The crusty bitch probably hopes she'll get knocked up to replace you, fuckface.

LMFAO you gave Neville a harem. You and your obsession with that fat chickenshit Neville. Listen just because you saw some fat slob rail your mother till Sunday doesn't mean you need to vent your shit with one hand. Your mother was a two-cent fuckhole. Simple. The cunt only whistled from her pussy because she tried to conceive your replacement. She regretted not aborting you. So you best wonder what she does when you aren't around. Because she's dick-hopping for a chance to get rid of you.

Neville is coat tail riding, bottom feeding fat cocksucker. I don't understand what your obsession in having to involve him in every plot or pairing, but considering that you yourself are a fat failure, it's telling. Fuck you, asshole.

“Harry pulled out his wand and without really even knowing what he was doing he pointed it to his head and a projection appeared. It showed from the start where Harry saved Cedric from an Acromantula to when Harry brought Cedric's body back. Every horrify detail was displayed nothing was left out. No one heard the gasps when they saw James and Lily appear. Sirius had tears in his eyes seeing his best friend as did Remus. What didn't register was the magic being displayed. Harry was very powerful to be able to project a memory without a use of a Pensieve. When the memory finished Harry lowered his wand.
"Do you need anymore proof" Harry said calmly then left. Hermione followed Harry not even bothering to notice the crowd that watched the whole thing.
Ron sat there not knowing what to say, his friend had suffered something bad and he had to accuse him. He felt low.“

At that moment...

Ron realized...

That he really screwed up.

Well Shelti, I don't think your ending was crappy. You merely showed that Dumbledore was a coward along. Had Harry not stopped Riddle to halt the first war, Riddle would've won. Dumbledore was just too focused on redeeming the Death Eaters to see they didn't want it. Sooner rather then later Riddle and his followers would've taken to attacking the mundane world and we mundane do war totally different form witches and wizards. It could easily resulted in the mundane world using nukes. Then it would've mattered if you were magical or mundane. Radiation doesn't care which you are. It kills both. Or the mundane world could capture some witches and wizards for genetic examination. Then if there were some gene that made you magical, they could've developed some bug that only killed magicals. What with the magical world being several centuries behind the mundane world, at least in Great Britain, they'd never have a clue as to what was killing them. Dumbledore didn't see it that way so allowed Riddle to do as he pleased. Thus at the end Dumbledore dropping his wand made perfect sense.

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

Ahh...finally someone who gets Harry Potter like I do. I'm so happy that happened to Dumbledore! You put the story EXACTLY how I wanted it to be be. Definitely 5 stars!

Wow. I love it!

Period (n.): A punctuation mark used in writing at the end of a sentence, or to indicate an abbreviation.
Nothing detracts from a written work quite as much as consistently making grammar errors that most 10 year olds would know to avoid.

Do yourself a favor and re-learn basic grammar. Seriously. This story is a nice idea, and there's a fair bit of good stuff here, but it feels like I'm reading an outline of a story, not a finished work.

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Lovely story. Great job showing the different characters and their growth.

Oh my damn that was good!
Rock on