| Reviews for Kelsey |
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Ellenar Ride chapter 12 . 8/14/2011 Aww! This story is so SWEET! I love it. |
Pheonix Autumn chapter 12 . 2/18/2011 LOVE IT ! U P ! |
Barbiegirl 22 chapter 12 . 2/5/2011 another great chap. i loved operation playtime. and it is soo cool that andy got to play with the toys. but they do have a point she is growing up what is going to happen to them as she gets even older? barbie D |
wonderful-world-of-disneyxo chapter 7 . 1/15/2011 i think this story is adorable! i am not normally into toys talking to their owner on fanfic, but im drawn to this story! keep up the great work. i do have one suggestion, though very minor: maybe reread the story for any small grammar mistakes? i mean, i know how it feels to just want to get the story posted, and i have stories too with grammar mistakes,but you DID ask for tips on approving. witH 2 cherries. :D |
Dawnmist 11 chapter 6 . 10/28/2010 Great story! I love how Kelsey settled the issue as to which camp to go to! This is really good, please update soon! ( |
Wishful Dream chapter 6 . 8/17/2010 This is such a cute story! Keep it going please! |
Barbiegirl 22 chapter 6 . 8/17/2010 you know myself i like chocolate covered strawberries or sugar coted cherries. but archeology camp. sounds like fun. ohhh are we going to find some dead stuff? well update soon. barbie D |
LotsoHugger chapter 5 . 8/12/2010 I absolutely LOVE this story so far! Please post more soon! May I make a quick suggestion? Jake should give Bo to Kelsey as a present or something. Thank you for bringing Wheezy back! |
Fluffy52 chapter 5 . 8/8/2010 im addicted to this story please update soon! |
crybaby-writes chapter 5 . 8/2/2010 This chapter flowed nicely. I like how you switched POVs to show different parts of the story. When a typical writer does that, it doesn't really work out that well. But, I believe you pulled it off. :) Keep it going! |
Barbiegirl 22 chapter 5 . 8/2/2010 another awesome chap i cant wait for more. also i love how you put in the play date and the scene with bzz and jesse. well update soon. barbie D |
Alana-kittychan chapter 5 . 8/1/2010 Aww soo cute |
You Mother Hugger chapter 4 . 7/20/2010 ...wait, isn't Kelsey 4? That would be pre-k, as far as I know. I went to 1st grade when I was seven. I never stayed back. So, what's going on...? |
Blackwolf chapter 4 . 7/17/2010 One major question. Where's Andy? And why haven't his toys talked about him yet? I mean this is Andy's child. I think they should have something to say about their owner having a child. |
Flash Cat chapter 4 . 7/17/2010 Ahaha tatty I was hoping that yet would how her thy they were alive |