I'm surprised that it was Miss Bunch who opened the door, especially after Miss Potts had said that a teacher would be on each dormitory floor. Miss Bunch is not really a teacher; she is a student. Also she was the one involved with the previous attempt by someone to get in to the first form dormitory, so I would expect Miss Potts to allocate someone else to look after the first-formers. Thus, I would expect Miss Bunch to be the thief, but I am prepared to be shown to be wrong.

I am looking forward to the continuation of this story.

When you have finished this story, are you going to write more stories following these girls through their time at Malory Towers all the way to the sixth form?

I am sorry, but every time you use the word lose, as in "lose her temper", you misspell it loose.

When will u update ? Pls do it soon.

When is the next chapter coming? I love this!

It's a very good start. I am a keen author myself and have been writing the series about Daffy Hope! You should write another chapter.

Finish the story pls, I like it very much :)

Pleeaaaasssse write more

I Love your story idea and the characters, I love writing fan fics as well. I was wondering if I could borrow your idea of Katie, Suzanne and the girls friends to create my own fan fic at Malory Towers?

Nice beginning!

Love it !

More
Please

I need to know the rest! How is this book gonna end? I'm thirsty for moree

Good story, but could you please write more? Dying to know what happens!

Its a good one! Keep going!

its so exciting please add more soon