Reviews for Torture
madelinedyer18 chapter 1 . 9/18/2017
Love it.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
It just sounded like 2 teenagers fucking. It didn't sound like Renesme and Jacob. Make it sound a little more passionate if you get my drift
Nessthemonster chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
So hot! Loved it :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
Please make sequel! I wanna hear Edward and Bella's reaction. Hehe. If they start yelling at her, she can just complain about them.
shakera chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
all I can say is awesomeness!:}
Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Really hot.
vampchick09 chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
that was soo funny! I love nessie xD
Ellie chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
*thumbs up* Awesome!
Zapphe chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
yes, pretty good, fun and hot !
narnia and beareject fan 1 chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
You wouldn't believe how many times I've read this story now! Its a wonder to me how I never though to review earlier, anyway...

So funny and so HOT! Honestly this is the story I read when I want to read something HOT and funny! LOVE IT! SO much :D

narnia and beareject fan 1

xoxo
Twilightfan1 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
That was okaay. A little too descriptive at the end, but okay. I mean, I'm a mature 11 turning 12 very soon, and that was okay. Now I know what lemons means...
AJ aka stalker chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
loved it.

poor nessie :(
Glamouredravenclaw chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
good, it was good!

~FRG
xoxo chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
haha.

she should have lap danced
keh chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
great story! i've always liked the idea of Renesmee getting sick of her parents constant out-loud sex life that she would need to create her own. You should do some more writing! D
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