| Reviews for Torture |
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madelinedyer18 chapter 1 . 9/18/2017 Love it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2015 It just sounded like 2 teenagers fucking. It didn't sound like Renesme and Jacob. Make it sound a little more passionate if you get my drift |
Nessthemonster chapter 1 . 12/20/2013 So hot! Loved it :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2013 Please make sequel! I wanna hear Edward and Bella's reaction. Hehe. If they start yelling at her, she can just complain about them. |
shakera chapter 1 . 5/1/2013 all I can say is awesomeness!:} |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2013 Really hot. |
vampchick09 chapter 1 . 5/3/2012 that was soo funny! I love nessie xD |
Ellie chapter 1 . 8/14/2011 *thumbs up* Awesome! |
Zapphe chapter 1 . 7/2/2011 yes, pretty good, fun and hot ! |
narnia and beareject fan 1 chapter 1 . 5/22/2011 You wouldn't believe how many times I've read this story now! Its a wonder to me how I never though to review earlier, anyway... So funny and so HOT! Honestly this is the story I read when I want to read something HOT and funny! LOVE IT! SO much :D narnia and beareject fan 1 xoxo |
Twilightfan1 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011 That was okaay. A little too descriptive at the end, but okay. I mean, I'm a mature 11 turning 12 very soon, and that was okay. Now I know what lemons means... |
AJ aka stalker chapter 1 . 2/20/2011 loved it. poor nessie :( |
Glamouredravenclaw chapter 1 . 1/13/2011 good, it was good! ~FRG |
xoxo chapter 1 . 12/26/2010 haha. she should have lap danced |
keh chapter 1 . 9/27/2010 great story! i've always liked the idea of Renesmee getting sick of her parents constant out-loud sex life that she would need to create her own. You should do some more writing! D |