I do wonder if anyone can start doing fanfics on the light novel/anime series, The Third: The Girl with the Blue Eye, regular and crossover types.

Cute story. I can totally buy the secretary having a thing for Honoka from how she acted around her. I do like that you had the waitress be abit mad with Paife, although in a later episode Paife lightly smacks the waitress on the arse. Paife is a great character, both in the anime and how your portraying her here.

Can't wait to see more of this, especially once Honoka comes into things. It will be especially cute and funny at first given her reactions whenever Paife would flirt or come out of the shower in the tank in just a towel. Definately looking forward to this.

You should write more, can't wait!