Like really good

pP

THIS IS THE CUTEST THING I HAVE EVER READ!

but...wheres belarus?

Awwwwww! That was hilariously cute!

oww my cheeks hurt from smiling to much

Is fluff overload possible?

soooo...fyuffy (fluffy)...
and twincest part was so sad...
great story...

I love Papa. he funny, da? please hurry with next chapter.

Wait the end the end is it over!

Wait... the end? Wait, what? I love the story! But NO! I hate when good stories end.

Aww, cute ending. I liked how Francis was being overprotective! XD

e.O

But...

*Mind explodes*

IT WAS JUST GETTING TO THE GOOD PART!

/Dies a little inside/

I love Francis in this story

From perv to protective father

Pls update soon or I stalk you till you do...

Good story though it seemed rushed! Is it AU (alternative universe) since the characters are students and parents? Is Kumajirou a stuffed polar bear in this story?

You were able to change my feelings several times as I read. At times I almost burst into tears, other times I was a little grossed out, and sometimes I was angry. You had good ideas for a fic, such as using a scarf to get them together. I'm glad Canada was recognized.

I found the characters somewhat OOC and some things didn't make sense to me. I don't think someone shy like Canada would rush into a relationship. If Russia had started touching and kissing him at their first meeting, Canada would more likely be traumatized and avoid him. Same with being sat on. It was creative of you to use that Russia sitting on Canada scene from the series in your story. I also don't think Canada would be playing in the snow for hours to the point of getting home late. He would also be able to just tell his family that he found the scarf and went to return it, but they lent him another one because it was cold.

In the first chapter, it said that Canada is 15, which would be 10th grade. However, Russia said "when you were in grade 8th," which meant Canada would be 13, making it two years ago instead of three years ago. If it were really 3 years ago, Canada would have been 12, which would put him in 7th grade. Or did Canada start an year early or skip a grade, putting him in 11th grade in the story?

If Canada and Ukraine have been friends to the point of going to each other's houses without calling first, wouldn't they have met each other's families by now? This means Ukraine would have introduced Russia to Canada by then.

America might care and worry about others, but he wouldn't be so angry, mean, and sneaky. He is more of the carefree and laid back type. I think he would be more nosy and start asking questions. I know he is also careless and stupid, but he wouldn't leave all of his mess to Canada either.

England is pretty much in character, and he and France are in no position to scold others for language since they often cuss. Well, they are hypocritic in the first place. France probably wouldn't mind America having parties, and would more likely approve and encourage Canada's relationship right away since he is so sexually obsessed. I think England would be the one to get mad and discourage it. Still, I like reading about a more responsible and less improper France.

Wouldn't Canada get in trouble for missing his afternoon classes?

The ending seemed abrupt and hanging. I wonder how England reacted after France dragged Canada home, and who America ended up with. I think he should have gotten in trouble for disobeying and having parties while his parents were away.

What actually happened to America and Canada's mother before England? What happened to England's mother as well?

I usually don't read Russia/Canada, but the title and summary got me interested, which means you did well on attracting readers. You should probably put a warning in the summary or AN about some America/Canada incest because quite a few people aren't comfortable with incest. I'm one of them. Some of the readers not comfortable with it might flame you. The warning can help people skip the story and not read, and reduce your chance of getting flamed.

Some of the spelling and grammar errors confused me a little.

Sorry if I offended you with my comments, or am being too picky. Injustice and bad OOC behavior (such as a character having less manners than in the original works) is just hard for me to take. I also get confused when things don't make sense, and don't take well to abruptness and too many unanswered questions. I'm not saying your story is bad, but just that I had problems with some areas of it.

I...fucking...LOVE THIS :3