10months later halloween Olivia is catwoman for Halloween and dylan is batman for Halloween zack and bailey dress up as the Penguin and Batgirl But zack and bailey saw the real catwoman and batman catwoman saw fish in zack and bailey hand
and she whip it from zack and bailey hand zack and bailey the kid run Cody help us we saw the real catwoman and batman
what you did not see the real catwoman and batman yes we did Cody pleases zack the are not real Catwoman and batman behan Cody look behan you and Cody see the real catwoman
and Batman

Zack love bailey

Next story be bailey marry zack mrs bailey martin and London marry woody mrs London fink and bailey be pregnant with a boy and girl and London be pregnant with a girl zack be a dad of a boy and girl and woody be a dad of a baby girl bailey is 4 month pregnant and London is 3 month pregnant 9 month later bailey give birth to a boy name Dylan shor martin and girl name bridgit alexis martin and London give birth to a baby girl name Olivia mia fink 9year later zack and bailey are 26 and Dylan is 5 and bridgit is 6 and woody and London is 26 and Olivia is 6 and cody is 21 and not marry and Dylan look like bailey and bridgit look like zack not bailey Olivia look like London the most not woody and cody move to New York
Bailey Has a job at Walmart get pay $1'000 a hour zack is at home with his kid bridgit and Dylan and London has a job at justice get pay $1'000 a hour woody is at home with his kid olivia

You are so different from other guy", and she continued the kiss with zack bailey and zack are together
I don,t know Cody. He,s just like you, Zack I like you more better in Cody I love you to zack I love to bailey

Bailey and zack are together

A great story over all. Just try to seprate the pargraphs a bit. I got a tiny bit counfsed in the story!

Really good, well narrated,just a bit of advice,try and split it up a bit, especially the speakers

That good!

Aw, a sweet story and you tell it well from Zack's PoV. However, you need to break up your paragraphs between speakers otherwise it becomes nearly impossible to read.