That was perfect !

Liked Kate a whole lot more than Hannah. Loved the last chapter immensely.

Wow, I can't believe I spent so many years int he Bones fan(fic)dom without discovering your stories. You're a fabulous writer, and your Booth and Brennan are so perfectly in-character - and more importantly in step with each other. You've managed to capture all those nuances that are so uniquely *Bones*.
Sometimes my fic versions tend to be slightly OOC but that's because I've written only AU so far myself (like I said on my profile, until very recently I avoided all stories of that kind, without exception. And then I read some extremely good ones which came highly recommended from a friend-such as Sleeplessinatlanta's Fated-and I realised that alternate reality can be so much better than the real thing,if it's handled well. I wish I'd discovered this sooner-preferably when the Bones verse was in turmoil what with the recent*cough*blonde*cough* developments. By introducing the Booth-Brennan dynamic in an alien setting, and still managing to preserve it, stories like these only seem to enhance the strength of the bond between them, showing us that what they have is bigger than plotlines and work places and age, bigger even than them-or, at the risk of sounding cheesy, that their relationship transcends time and space. In other words, this serves as a reminder of why we love Bones.) Anyhow, Bones is all about how their dynamic and how they play off one another, so even if one of them is out of character and the other one responds accordingly the balance isn't lost, right? I'm off to discover tthe rest of your Bones stories - provided you've written any. I'd love it if you checked out some of my stuff, too, in your own time - I would really appreciate the feedback

I really enjoyed this. The best chapters were the ones where you got farther away from the TV story and made it your own.

Great story, thanks for writing!

Just found the sotry and read it...love your take on the charcters and found it to be ture to the show. WONDERFUL!

Great story and I appreciated the different POVs. Love that you ended with Sweets's perspective.

Love It!

update very soon!

Wow... that was great.

Gosh, I laughed so hard at - "in a bizarre spectacle, Lance, Booth and about half the group take to the stage to perform a rousing rendition of "Lime in the Coconut," after which a few of them start crying. It's all so weird."

"...inclusion of the research bias analogy" Ahahaha... brilliant job :)

A pleasand chapter adn effectively written.

Loved teh flirtign between Shaw and Sweets.

Also liked Sweets' thoughts about his regret from "Pain the the Heart'.

Loved it!

*Wistful sigh*

MEMORIES! Oh, the memories that must be flying through Booth's and Brennan's heads. Love the twist!

I really like your version of their first night together. I think it probably would have gone very much like this.

I LOVE THIS. I love it I love it I love it.

Just thought you should know. :D