Good one. I'll read it if you write it.

snorting at my desk, LOL...this was awesome, and fun!

CONTINUE PLEASE

This person copied your work: story/view/1107043/1/where-are-your-manners-jikook

Bella the Bitch is Busted! I'm Following if you're continuing.

Oh, this could so be a great story! I loved it and would love to read more...Please write it...please :-)

Wow, really good job with this! Well done! I really thought Edward was like some other different case, not the son of the owner of the hotel! I laughed loudly when I read the last couple of sentences! Again, good job! Kudos :):))

Happy Writings! :))

~~SegaParks 101~~

ha! this was fun, i liked this

I see a longer fic written all over this. It would be great, Bella and Edward hating each other, but for how long?

Please consider extending this I think you could make a great full length story, high powered hotel mogul Edward and bitchy spoiled actress Bella, just watch him knock her off of her pedestal. The game is on.

Too much potential to leave as a one/shot.

Oh,ho ho... It's so on! Hope you'll consider writing a bit more of this :)

Haha, cute! There have been some uppity people I've wanted to stick it to, but didn't have the clout like Edward...

Oh! This was such a good one. It feels like the start of a marvelous story. Want to consider it? I would be first in line.

Hope you and yours are all safe and well there. I made a donation and hope and pray that all will help a bit. Mother Nature at her worst. :(

Be safe.

Thanks,

Lisa

lol... I didn't even know you;d written this. Very cute! :))

L

This was such an unusual o/s - when I reached the end, I kept scrolling thinking there was something wrong with my screen! :-) It really made the point though, Leis and I loved that. It was punchy, clever and fun! x

That was great!