I really like this story and would like to read more. It looks like the last update was 2015, and well it’s near the end of 2019, is there anymore characters? I don’t know what has happened, but I’m looking forward to new characters for this story

are you going to finish this story ?

10.
Gifted/Shield
Bella's pov' then m yself begun floating
Blacked out then then turned Black then suddenly you escaped from us Executed me with the best frien ds were desroyed then m yself had ESP You'r sushi began to chant hair flying with my Poewerss erupted recalling I CALL THE POWER OF MARS MARS FIRE IGNITE! Blared a truest Bitten then with them kidnapped forced then Venom turned out from snakes then began mastering m y gift was supernaturally gifted was too late used my fifth senses evolved very too most more powerful trained mansfited too far strongest then suddenly chanting into Tibetan then yelled EVIL SPIRIT BE EXORCIZED! Was strong fast more lethal but dan gerous then Blacked out then rose useing m y planetary ablities was now more powerfulcould have psychic powers without hair grew back very long then used my powers Emergede got a galactic headache shielding was still trained but suddenly this on e has ESP She's very powerful has agreed to be a seer what is it m y sen ses went on Fedration red alert young lady you are blinded yes my lord what are you you see Psionic Popped then had Anmesia was Anmesic then the bodies aged but from as all of bites then was forced to be a member was not normal not human from here had stopped aging from the host had Jurai blood red eyes was very hungry it was a thirst then then suddenly went on a hunt hunted for animals healthy but suddenly too late was n ever human focused my powers Crunched with superhuman strength blacked outside with them brought here lost memories Alice where you been then gain ed a new life then Chained freely with as all of them blown snapped punished then Blazing freel bled to death who suffered as all of b rokenbones blasting freely took from me was dying from here then the v enom was real then too late Alice she's waking up to the sun can you remember us no m y mouth never moved at all so they then from donated ones shattered with witnesses then reported me was born with the Eye of Surak Alice they took from her memories and her sight is what a Slayer a Vampire slayer is female she never reproduced then it came too late my powers were here but awakened Crashed freely then never changed frozen as a grlbut now too late unable to age anymore so they stopped deathflawless but Abcient but Old then trapped thenn ever went old Alice she has Anmesia is Anmesiac then it came my eyes were fiery yellow had good but civilized manners gained a most toned body of a wild biker chick was now graceful but most elegant had the body of a exotica dancer Alice the make up wore merged looked mature oh my god what a a drop dead beautfiul woman watch it you new yes need your help igot a bad feeling you are telepathic oh my god Alice blurted a shield yes please Excuse me it's really healthier to replace the blood no way she is psychic trained a second time suddenly Bree dressed very anime b ut looked like Lita was a advanced cook but ourselves looked young were adults was immortal b ut cursed by him cursed me to be a seer now my powers acting funny things deported graced more rooms n ow blown freely here we are low but perfect sized then too late Phil took a newest wife so my Dad but it was too late had kids again but followed us with both shattered then grown with siblings shattered were c lamoped freely Broken freely then had control over it converted what a nightmare then the familuies aged n ever had kids again aged to adulthood exploded freely then brought here killed freely murdered then it really happened my newest sight took flight seen themno way you are young-looking yes now unable to returned we are spliting off ten too late were into Mount Seleya granted a jobe kept eyes Black looked like her crap then it was too late never died.

I would like to point out something that confused me, you make it sound like having five senses is strange and unusual. Humans have five senses; hearing, smell, touch, taste, and sight. Anything more (esp, astral projection, precognition, etc.) is called a sixth sense. Now, I understand Bella is supposed to be blind, but even replacing sight as one of her senses, it would still be considered a sixth sense.

I really like this story, please update soon

Gosh.
I never read a story like yours. It's logical, interesting and ... just perfect!
At the beginning I was slightly suspiciously because most of this stories are written childishly and illogical.
I truly hope that you find the inspiration for this story because it's really really awesome!

Yours,
MissM

This is such a great story I hope that you find some inspiration to continue this story, I'll keep my fingers crossed. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I hope that the author will update and finish this story soon. I have enjoyed it so far.

Omg I just finished reading the chapters so far and love it!

Please write more...

So this story had a lot of potential I'm happy you're not abandoning it. First off I want you to realize that every human being has five senses I understand that you mean that she also had this vibration sense and not sight but it should still be sixth sense. Second Sensei is by no means Chinese it's Japanese. Thirdly no one does martial arts in a freaking kimono. A kimono is a traditional JAPANESE rob that fits tightly and purposely restricts leg movement worn by women when it's a male it's called a males kimono because there are distinct differences between the to. No one does martial arts in them outside of anime and movies at least not in the sense that you have portrayed it here. The stuff you see true martial artist wearing are called gi's in this case a karate gi. If they do wear a kimono like dress for training it was be accompanied by a hakama to allow full leg motion with the upper top being a robe. Saying he was wearing a kimono is like saying he was train in a floor length cocktail dress. Would it kill you to Google shit cause I don't think it would. Cultural disrespect aside I still think think is a interesting tale and hope you get your mojo back soon.

Awesome!:)

That was awesome! I really like where the story is going! Keep writing...I'll keep reading!

I really liked this chapter! Keep writing...I'll keep reading!

I love it so far. I can't wait to see what happens and where you are taking this story...please continue writing it...I hate reading a story only to be left with a cliffhanger. I love an ending! :D Keep up the terrific work!