| Reviews for There's A Light In the Attic |
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Butts chapter 53 . 7/1/2016 That fighting in chapter 50-some was one of the most realistic couple fights I've read in fanfiction |
Life is no Fairytale chapter 64 . 10/7/2015 I'm rereading this yet again because its one of the few good KH fics out there and I went to your page to catch up on the sequel but it's gone. Did I miss an update about it being deleted? Is it gone for good or will it be coming back in some way? |
TSOHG A MA I chapter 62 . 9/2/2015 How is she going to pee if her pants won't come off? |
Riko-San chapter 1 . 12/24/2014 I remember reading this when you first started updating it, and it continues to be one of my favorite fanfictions on this site! Every time I read this, I find myself grinning at Miyuki's and Riku's interactions and even laughing out loud at some of the situations they get themselves into. I love this because of how easily they get along- its so natural, I feel like I'm reading a script for a game or something. And those two have such a real relationship! Things aren't sweet and sugary all the time like they are in other fics; they fight and scream, they say hurtful things, and there are times when they both want to give up, but in the end they always make up with other. I absolutely love Miyuki and Riku being together because they struggle together to be in a relationship when all odds are against them and they exist and find hope in a stressful environment. You get to see the battle DiZ, Namine, and (most importantly) Riku, which is something the games failed to put into detail. Riku's personality and his own battle with darkness isn't shown in-depth in the games, but this shows that he wasn't just struggling physically, but emotionally as well. He isn't just Sora's friend who selflessly stayed behind in darkness to protect the worlds, nor is he merely the boy who was so overcome with darkness he felt he could nothing more but assist his friend from the shadows. He is a teenager who messed up and worked hard to fix it, who fought back against the darkness in his own heart and the hearts of others, who battled the Organization before Sora even knew they existed, and who strained to become stronger, all while dealing with the mental weight his past mistakes put on his chest. And Miyuki- I've found it extremely rare for an OC fit so naturally in a canon storyline (personally, I've only found a few fanfics) and Miyuki fits the role like a hand into a glove. She's bold, stubborn, and honest, and has a level head during times of intense emotional distress. However, she has some faults as well, like leaping before she looks, taking on more than she can handle, and letting her pride get in the way of rational thinking at times. But these negative things make her more human. She's not perfect, so she makes mistakes and learns from them. She has a strong sense of whats wrong and right, but respects others' opinions. I honestly have not seen a OC so well developed since Meia in "I Want to be a Turk!", and that was a while ago. It's stories like this that inspire me to write, and I hope one day I'll be able to spin a tale as wonderful as the one you have created. |
Forgetful Insanity chapter 13 . 9/21/2014 NO NOT LITTLE NEMO OH WHY |
giggles chapter 40 . 9/5/2013 I laughed so hard at the store part! |
destined to be me chapter 65 . 8/12/2013 Oh my gosh! This is definitely THE best story i've read online. You really are an amazing author! Keep writitng please! |
KhAeL chapter 65 . 7/23/2013 I just loved your story. There a few down moments here and there but overall it was great! :D I loved the twist and little moments you put into it. finished it all in 2 days, too! :D wonderful job! |
sierragust chapter 65 . 6/23/2013 I hadn't had a paopu fruit before, but I want to share it with my mother. Cute story, by the way. |
Fatecaster chapter 65 . 3/10/2013 HNNNNNNG I have no words to describe how utterly and completely I ADORE this story. Honestly, my brain goes off into an endless fangirl squee every time I think about it. All I can say, is sheer perfection. This my absolute favorite fanfic for KH and you've made Riku's personality 10000% perfect for his character. Your OC is brilliant too! Ok, I really am gonna stop fangirling now, promise XD |
Natalie chapter 65 . 3/3/2013 This story was amazing. I read the whole thing, and I probably should have reviewed earlier. But this is to say that you are an absolutely amazing writer, and you did this so well I could see it all happening as a movie instead of a script. Actually, this should be a movie. This has to be the best story I have ever read. Good Job. *fangirl scream* Did I mention I love this yet? XD |
Cdelancy chapter 65 . 8/1/2012 !that was perfecto! |
Limes And Kiwis chapter 5 . 7/22/2012 well, someone's a chatterbox! :p |
RavenxRiku chapter 65 . 6/14/2012 I'd just like to say... YOU ARE AWESOME! I would never have been able to write such a great story! Thankyou so much for creating such a brilliant story! |
Invader Ivy chapter 65 . 5/27/2012 Awesome story! |