This is absolutely amazing. I can't stress this enough, you are a genius. Seriously this has to be the best origin story to an oc I've ever read.

I really want to read this story, the plot is very interesting, but I can't get over the way the story is structured. Please edit! this is intriguing but I can't keep reading a story where there are paragraph breaks mid sentence.

OK so I read your stories backwards. I can through Games as a Riddler fan. I was so intrigued by your Psyche/Catherine Adams/Elizabeth Griffen character that I had to read more. You built her up so fantastically that hey origins story did not disappoint. Now i have to go back and reread Games to be see her come back full circle.

The structure is cringe worthy. It's impossible to ignore. Violations of grammar is acceptable, but this, is complete ignorance of every guideline, and law within the English language. A few more years in education should allow you to express your ideas much better. Hopefully at least.

Absolutely wonderful! I legitimately couldn't stop reading until I got to the end. At the beginning, I agreed with your A/Ns, especially when you were worried how you were going to get them together. I have to say in my opinion, it was perfect. I'm excited to see if you've written more about this coupling, but as I said I'm more than satisfied with the ending and I don't really know if I want it extended because of how perfect I found it. All that rambling aside, you did an astounding job with this, and I look forward to your future works. :3

AMAZAZING! ABSOLUTLEY LOVED IT!

OMG I LOVED THIS SO MUCH JIFJGFIGFJHGG I LOVE IT!

This was a pleasurable read. At first I really didn't want Cat's feelings succumb towards Crane, but in the end I think it was just as well that she let them :) I really want some boots like hers.

Hello, hi, I'm one of Scarecrow's many fangirls. I'm not afraid of him today...I'm too emotionally whacked out after breaking up with my boyfriend.

Loving this story! It's actually kind of dark...slightly gruesome, actually. But it's exciting, too! I love it!

well shit, this was pretty damn good.

Wow. The way you've written this story is phenomenal. I love Catherine, she's just amazing. This is one of my favorite fics. Honestly, I read this a long time ago and forgot about it. I've just come across it again a little while ago, and here I am finishing up an hour and a half later. You're a great writer, and I look forward to reading more of your stories. Hugs!

I love and adore this story. Especially the way you ended it, that last part there was brilliant! Keep it up!

HEY! I really like your story so far! But of course there are some little things wrong with it that you probably wouldn't think about.

In America we don't say whilst or mum. It's while and mom. And I know that it's just a little language difference but when I read that I get brought out of the story. It's really no big deal, just a small nitpick. It's alright for Cat to say it since she's British an all. But Dr. Crane is American so it's just odd.

On another note, Cillian Murphy is soo beautiful! :D

This was such a beautiful story! Not in the sense in that it was twisted and a little sick, but you managed to create beauty with the words you chose, in the way you tackled the emotion of fear; I was fascinated by it! Catherine was so easy to relate to. She wasn't beautiful and I loved that! You gave her a beauty that comes with emotion and spirit and that was wonderful! I also adored that she was English and came from Leeds. I was born and bred in Bradford, so that made it so easy to put myself in her shoes. The way you manipulated emotion really tugged at my heart strings, as well.

This was such a beautiful piece and you get the highest amount of respect from me :)

Wow, this was absolutely amazing. I'm really impressed with your writing skills. I really enjoyed reading this.

Riley!