Very nicely done. This was exactly how Rory's character would have acted if the writers were doing their jobs correctly, but once again GG's made her respond in a way that was completely opposite to how her character would normally react to a situation like this. It'd be great, though, if you could expand this story some time and keep going with it to show Rory and Dean getting together, eventually, in a way that wouldn't be so devastating to Lindsay (or, well, Rory for that matter).

great story

you should of written wha is happening at the INN

Ooh, wow. That's a nice twist on that! Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you for writing this! I've always hated that she slept with Dean. I mean, I don't mind that Jess didn't actually end up being her first, because I think it makes their reunion [post-finale] a bit more special, still a little more pure, but I'd way rather than Logan (or heck, even Marty, who I always thought was pretty cool) had been her first. The Dean Affair just pissed me off! That was more out-of-character for Rory than stealing a freaking boat! WAY worse, in my opinion. One is just a violation of physical ownership. The other is a violation of a sacred emotional, physical (and, when it comes down to it, legal) bond, forged either by God or by the State, depending on if you're religious or not.

Sorry, I'm rambling. I just really appreciate you writing this, because it's so much better than what ASP and her writing staff came up with.

Now THIS is the way this should have gone! I loved it! I would really like it if you would continue. If not, that's okay. Good idea! :)

This is exactly how the Rory/Dean situation should have gone. In the show Rory acted very OOC to me. Wonderful job!

This is much happier! I'm glad that Rory pushed him off. Dean is just stupid and I've always hated this scene. So, well done! :)