Reviews for Too Much Telephone
asm613 chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
and a small hiss escaped his mouth.

"I've been waiting for this all day," Naruto said, grinning toothily.

Sasuke smirked. "If you'd asked nicely, I'm sure I would've been happy to let you have it earlier."

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love the dialogs and interactions between your naruto and sasuke. though in a previous story you had written that sasuke like hearing naruto say his name during sex- maybe you could have had naruto moan out a few 'sasuke's' during their love making session...very hot by the way.

thanks for sharing.
nanakira chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
since i can't pm you, this is the only way i can reach you...

Happy New Year!

On New Year's Day a year ago,

I started off the year

by making resolutions

that were probably severe.

I said I'd save my money,

as this seemed so very wise.

I vowed I would improve my health.

I swore I'd exercise.

I stated I would do my homework

every single day.

I'd brush my teeth religiously

to ward off tooth decay.

I'd eat my fruits and vegetables

and keep my bedroom clean.

I'd treat my sister kindly

though she's often very mean.

My resolutions lasted me

about a half a day.

I promised I would keep them

but I broke them anyway.

So now I'm fat and penniless.

My homework's overdue.

My sister's mad. My teeth are bad.

My room is messy too.

And yet I think I may have found

the best of all solutions,

and this year I've resolved

to not make ANY resolutions.

So, in that case I wish you a Happy New Year :love:

ps: and i did read and love this story and all the other ones that you've posted here so far. ja nee!
BeeBee Forthwright chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
hahahaha that was cute 3
Juura99 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Loved it! Loved it! Is there more? MOOOORE!

Sorry, I had too much coffee and now I'm hyper. But it was awesome!
5Angel chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
The perfect interlude to MC.

It shows them not slowing down or being dull together, rather, life is still hectic all the more hectic as they try to make time for each other...and apparently there's plenty more things for them to try he he he! :)