This would be Susan's third life. She regenerated into Susan Foreman after getting shot in the back of the head as a teen.

Great new chapter

Well that is a nice way to connect again to the old series with an encounter with Ian and Barbera

I will immediatey check out your next part with anticipation

Well written looking forward to more

Interesting technical descriptions and a good conclusion to the Susan 'getting her own back' and 'rescuing the prisoners' bit

I like the way you have set up this story using some ideas that are really good

I eagerly awake chapter 4

Good description of Susan's regeneration and shows Susan still has compassion at least for Aliens

So onto chapter 3

Wow this is strong stuff, I think this is a good start and a well thought out story line

The way humanity acts is well thought out and explained and is reasonable, the characters are well written and comparisons with Nazis gives us an idea of how the humans are turning out