| Reviews for Russian Roulette |
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PolLiet chapter 1 . 5/30/2018 Aw... Congratulations on this, it was very good. Sort of reminds me of "The Lady or the Tiger?", a classic short story that has a cliffhanger like this does, where it can go either way, depending on what the reader thinks (I'm for the tiger in the story mentioned above). Anyway, while I feel like Poland totally would have just shot Russia (like someone else mentioned), I would have liked to read more of Toris in this, particularly after the bang of the gun. Maybe that's just me trying to get you to write more though xD. All-in-all, brilliant job. |
LunaLuRoll chapter 1 . 1/12/2014 dang did ya have to kill poland? |
Katt1848 chapter 1 . 1/8/2012 rage quit. did he actually get shot? because i know in that game they purposefuly get a gun that will 'bang' even without the bulle in the chamber |
neonrainbowneko-chan chapter 1 . 9/18/2011 I hate you so much! UGH! CLIFFHANGER! BETTER CONTINUE! . |
spontaneous-rainbow chapter 1 . 5/16/2011 Yaoi-san- WHAT. HAPPENED? Minty-chan- Oh my god, did he die? Is he dead? Oh my god, he cannot die. I mean, HE'S POLAND FOR GOODNESS SAKE! Yaoi-san- AJHFGHGJHGFD I'm just totally being all flipping my shit and everything, I can hardly type properly! ASDFGHJKL don't make Feliks die! |
spac3 m0nk3y chapter 1 . 3/2/2011 I really love this story and it's very well written, so I hate to nitpick but there's just one thing I think should be pointed out. The dialogue is a bit tough to read because of different characters talking in the same paragraph (typically every time a new character begins speaking, a new paragraph is started) Just thought I'd mention it Really do love this story though, it's very powerful and LithPol is such a sweet pairing... /3 Happy writing! |
hella depression chapter 1 . 10/16/2010 Aww, now you've gone and made me sad. :T Up until the end I totally expected Poland to just shoot Russia. That seems like the kind of rule-bending out of the box thinking he'd resort to. xD IT'LL ALWAYS BE MY TURN |
ShazM chapter 1 . 9/17/2010 That was both incredible in general, and incredibley sad... But really good! You really managed to convey emotions in a way that hit right there at home. |
Prussia-sama chapter 1 . 7/31/2010 NO! FELIKS! d-did he die? |
Organized Kitty Chaos chapter 1 . 7/16/2010 Gjjjdbglggtsfjgdzhwjckgif D': This kept on the edge of my seat, I love it...It made me all emotional. I love it. _ |
Lisa chapter 1 . 7/10/2010 ; A ; so..sad... I love it. :) it's very well written. |