I like this story so far, please continue onward! :)

Great chapter, I really enjoyed reading it. Update soon! :) x

That was good! You definitely should keep writing.

I'm glad you chose to continue with this, it's too good not to.

AHAHAHAHAHA this chapter made me laugh, too xD

The beginning is very interesting...I wonder if that is a set up to something else that will happen later on, or is it just a dream?

I just really enjoy your style of writing, and this story seems very promising.

I particularly like this line:

"Talking to five year old children is not fun. Nor is it a useful experience, as my mother claims."

Great job :)

Okay, first off, I LOVE the opening line. That is what got me to open up this fic. It made me laugh, SO HARD.

I really like this. I like the Gryffindor bit and the red hair bit...and the end also made me laugh.

"What if I'm like Peter, too?"

This is great :) I love it.

This is a great start. Please write more soon!

Oh, please write more! You're off to a great start and it's full of potential!

Are you going to continue this? I think It's good :D