that was awesomee

Even if English is not your first language, you still write it better than the ones who were born speaking it! Like, this was amazing. Please do write more, I was a tad disappointed that this ended there :( but still. I love this pairing, and I loved your writing. It flows smoothly, and your great at description, and dialogue. These seem to be problems for other writers, but not for you! Great job.

Very nicely done. I enjoyed reading this. I wouldn't know that English is
not your first language. Perhaps this is one of my favourites to read.

Well done.

-Earl Ciel Phantomhive

Please continue! your engilish is perfectly fine by my standards, the flow of your writing is lovely by the way! pleas continue doing what you what to with this book! ibeg of you to continue! that word has been used way to many to times! 3

HAha. I loved it. it was well... 'deep'.

This was awesome! I absolutely love it. There should be a sequel! Pleasse, write another one?

This is really good! I think that you have captured the characters almost perfectly, I could picture everything.

Well done!

Always keep writing :)

That was amazing! Never would've guessed that English isn't your first language...Alois seems perfectly in character (which is nice because I've seen way too many fanfictions where the characters are just names), and I love the little thing about Ciel and "My Lord" at the end...

seriously. it sucks.

appeal to ethos, the character, is the most important thing (particularly in fanfictions), and you completely destroyed Ciel.

i would say more, but it's just not worth it. don't do this again.

this was awesome!

My opinion? This needs a sequel! xD Even though you say that English is not your mother language, you're amazingly great! Love the descriptions and characterisations. :D Hope to read more from you!

Multi chappie! plz great story!

aawww! i want more! this is sexy! sadness to the epic proportions! but...oh well...love it anyway!

I've seen worse fanfiction from people who have known English their entire lives.

;;

I say ti is great. The characters are in place, the it's nicely written, grammar is good... Everything is fine in my eyes.

Do some justice and continue for future writers of Ciel/Alois.

Woooo ! i loved it ... awsome heheheheee XD 'i want u to lick it and go higher' heheheheee eeeekk