Aw I absolutely loved this. Teddy and Lily were so cute. I especially loved the bit at the end with the hint of Scorose and Ron knowing how this is going to end because he has never won an argument against Hermione and Ginny and they really are their mothers daughters.

awww I love it, especially the ending poor ron

All I can say is awwwwwwwwwwww

It's really really cute! Harry is such a sweetie Daddy! God, Harry Potter is over! snif-

I love the last scene with ron and harry in the bar, so nostalgic and funny.

This is so cute!

Oops... What about Victoire? Still, very interesting storyline.

I absolutly love Teddy/Lily. Can't wait to read more of your Teddy/Lily. And this was a great one-shot. :)

Hahaha, LOVE! Great job dear!

Loved it! :)

"As they dance, his smile fades. Because they're standing way too close. And Teddy's holding her in such a way and Lily's eyes are closed in bliss and Teddy looks like...well Teddy looks like Harry does whenever Ginny's in his arms.

This cannot be right. Teddy is like an older brother. He should be stopping boys from holding Lily like this not taking part in it himself. Harry watches, helplessly, as they dance and he just wants to stomp over, rip Lily from his arms and command they act like family.

Because Harry's seen Teddy as a son for year now, he always imagined his family felt the same. But not Lily. Never Lily.

The way they move is both familiar and awkward and it both pleases and angers Harry because it means nothing has happened yet. That Teddy respects him far too much to go after his daughter. But not enough to not fall in love with her.

Love? Is it love?

He watches the dance end and eyes meet and there's a longing that he as a father never wants to see in his daughter's eyes. But it's there and it's so bright that he can't believe he's never seen it before.

He turns away, he just can't watch anymore, and he meets Ron at the bar."

Brilliantly written. A mix of humor but still a *shake of head* at Harry while still not ridiculing him. Great Work!

sigh. inevitable.

haha sweet 3

Lol... I laugh so much with the Rose-Scorpius hint and Ron's sorrow

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Aww, bless! Poor Harry and Ron. Aint nothing you can do about it guys.

Awww, so sweet. ) I read too much Teddy/Lily, and this is just very out of the ordinary and I love it.