OK... It was a good read so I can't really complain about it.

He romance was only at the end!?

That’s it? Sorry don’t mean to be negative but hinata progress went nowhere. She takes all this shit she should have realized already that she can do want she wants what reason is their to listen to her father or the elders? She can leave and defy them whenever she can and you can keep putting Naruto and hinata relationship to the side with no actual progress it’s tiring and makes no sense whatsoever. You should have just written their confession to each other and get it over it early it would change the dynamic for hinata and make things simple what a waste of writing potential.

Funny parts, it was a great read.

although the syntax and grammar was off at times, i really enjoyed the development in this story. if it weren't fanfiction, i could've easily seen this as canon with how well you portrayed the characters.

that was good keep the chapters coming

DAMNNNN! Oh how I wish this was part of the real story. I love Hinata's development. Such an amazing fight. Love it! Can't wait to read more and hope her and Naruto team up.

You suck at writing fight scenes.

This was really awesome! Love the ending with both Naruto and Hinata thinking about their mother's advice about love before they kissed...

And Hiashi getting his ass kicked by Naruto literally was really funny and the insults between the two were almost like how they would be in canon. Great job!

And this is where I stop reading. Hiashi is almost like royalty. He would never lower himself like that in an ice cream parlor. Also, you use Japanese phrases here and there but your fics heavily lacks the Japanese cultural influence you see in the Naruto verse.

It was sooo beautiful and great, but why did it have to end so quickly! I want to see what happens afterwards! ''Believe it!''

seriously i hope masahi kishimoto was reading this right now he would learn a lesson or two from you...after i read the title i thought it will be overlaced with romance story but you story was a breath of fresh air... WOWWOWSUPER DUPER WOW if that counts
Amazing plot...the way you showed hinatas development within the anime story line was perfect...no one felt out of character from the original anime...i hate it when hyuga hiashi is shown all black and when story drifts from being a story of hardwork to a story of prophecies and what not random powerful blood line relation...
i loved all the action scenes and the background music...you gave hinata her fair share of fights, romance, decision making, her role and love for family, bond with her sensei...which is so unlike manga where she was just a naruto fan girl...plus yours was closer to reality as naruto had other people to think about than just sasuke and other feeling to ponder on like romance and not being his dense self all the time...

But ...first the fall of truth in the anime had this property if one fails to win over the other half the other half will dominate you in real world that is why naruto was warned in original anime but hinata failed in this one but still continued to be her...second what upsets me is you didnt lead the prophecy anywhere i guess you planned to write more but got busy with stuff so finished it midway

*angry face* Why u no upload?! And for six years as well!

Nice NaruHina ending!

I hope there'd be an action-packed, romance-heavy, family-based sequel to this!

Lol. You Hinafags are so pathetic. Hinatits is a useless talentless loser. Go kill yourself.