Reviews for why
Nytiri chapter 2 . 12/22/2015
Wonderful Job with the story, so far...
Please update, and finish the story!
I want to see the ending! :)
Thanks,
Nytiri
Radar1388 chapter 2 . 7/18/2011
i think you should definitley update, i want to see more of this
TaleHeart chapter 2 . 7/1/2011
Good idea so far, but the chapters are just a tad short. i can't wait for the next one, so please update soon. PS Are you going to do Silver's POV as well? Cuz it'd be cool.
suns and stars chapter 2 . 5/27/2011
please update i want to read the rest
suns and stars chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
this looks really good
Wherever Girl chapter 2 . 8/15/2010
Why do I have a feeling there's going to be a bit of SarahxSilver in this story? lol Very nice. Keep up the good work!
kaitamis chapter 2 . 8/12/2010
wow cool do another this is awesome will he find him oh please let him find Silver
FashionistState chapter 2 . 8/12/2010
Yay!

Nice setup; leaves me wanting more!

One thing (nitpicking XD): "15 year old teenager" is a bit redundant...
mynameisqwerty chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
hey. just read you're story, and i just gotta say that you're making Jim sound really sappy. he's not. Sure he tears up a little but he's not a cry baby. just pointin' it out.
kaitamis chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
this is great make another chapter as soon as possible I want to know what happens