Man, there’s just so many good parts in this fic. 10/10 I highly recommend.

Thank you for writing this! This is the way it should have ended. Now in my imagination this is the ending! I literally cried when I watched the last episode of Escaflowne (luckily no one was around). I STILL CRY when I watch it actually! That is besides the point though. The point is this story ROCKS and you ROCK for writing this story!

love it!

~Mikado xx

Yes, the story was just right.

It really is the ending Escaflowne absoulutely needs.

Thank you for your work. It was wonderful.

Okay, so this fic fucking ROCKS MY WORLD! I Love it! I sorta wish it was expanded to a few chapters with mor details about the weeks spent back on gaea catching up! Man, its so hard to find well written Esca Fics where they go along with the original story line. I especially like how there was no catastophe or near death in this.

I LOVE the "eligibility" bit with Merle! It was prefectly set up in the begining and then at the end at the dinner tabel... I nearly choked on my gum I was laughing so hard!

Also this bit here:

She reached out a hand, grabbed a fistful of Van's red shirt and pulled him close to her face.

"I don't care if you have to fly to the Mystic Moon yourself, Hitomi will be here when this baby is born. Do you understand me?"

Van's dark eyes grew wide and he silently nodded.

Millerna held him for a moment longer then gasped in pain and released him. Dryden leaned over and told Van in a stage whisper, "I'd do as she says. She's never used that voice with me and I'm her husband you know."

it freaking AWESOME! I litterally laughed out loud and go weird looks for it. - That is so in character for them it made me grin like a psycho! And the comments about Celena getting A gymelef... utter brilliance! All in all, I love this story! Thank you for writting it!

Yay! That is the way the series should have ended. Good job! The only thing I can think of to critique is that Van seemed a little out of character. I don't think he would have acted that way after the series, maybe during the series, but not after. But nonetheless, I thought it was a great fan fiction. Keep up the good work!

OMG! I think I love you. (platonically) I have read/ seen all three versions of Escaflowne and I loved the tv series the most, but it left me so unhappy because you don't know if they actually end up together and they never said, "I love you" to each other! This story made my life. Thanks so much! Keep writing your style is wonderful:P

Ace! This is how it should have ended. I always get ticked off with how she finally admits her feelings then... poof...she's back home. Well done on the happy ending it needed.

I think everyone wishes that it had ended like this or something like this. ( You did a GREAT job on this and I really enjoyed reading it! D

awwwwwwww... and... FINALLY! a happy ending for Van and Hitomi... in the ending of the series i was like... what the heck people... how dare you end it like that? :)))

i loved their quirky lines... especially when Millerna kind of exploded at Van to get Hitomi back in time for the delivery... :)))

THANK GOD! the ending that was SUPPOSED to happen! I saw the ending and spent the rest of the night thinking "What the hell! That ending sucked!" but now i'm satisfied and I thank you, you are my new favorite person, lol by the way...love how you ended the story lol very funny and fitting. They should take that idea of yours and make it into a final episode. Of course making you rich lol _ loved it and again I thank you for no longer making me mad about that ending :)

This was a very good one-shot! I loved the characterization! Such a great ending too. If only the real show had ended like that, huh? The part I loved most was your vocabulary. It's hard to find such good stories sometimes and you really hit the nail with the hammer on this one! :) It was so well written and your scenes seemed to flow so well.

My only suggestion is to put dividers between scenes. Sometimes they flowed a bit too well and it left you wondering why Hitomi was suddenly speaking. Other than that, there were only a few minor grammatical errors. It was a pleasure to read and review this story. I can't wait to read more from you.

blue...

great! it was well-written and so sweet!