| Reviews for Help me With my Tie |
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Nihaoworld chapter 1 . 10/12/2012 Heya! Kolkolkol... Review so russia doesnt kill me and because THIS WAS SO FREAKING CUTE! I WAS LIKE, AAAAHHHH SUFIN! THEY ARE SO CUTE TOGETHER! |
Derp chapter 1 . 11/16/2011 Awesome! |
pocketfulofmumbles chapter 1 . 3/19/2011 I liked how you made the situation five times more awkward with Tino behind Berwald instead of in front. It makes perfect sense and was extremely adorable. Also, you write Peter perfectly. Also also, I happened upon this almost six months ago now. This was the first SuFin fic I ever read. Thank you for getting me into this fandom with this lovely story. :) |
AutumnLeafFall chapter 1 . 2/26/2011 great fanfic XD *trying to resist a bloody nose* yeah getting thoughts that are going ahead and that I also should not be thinking of at the moment but oh well |
Sammy chapter 1 . 12/26/2010 ADORABLE! 3 Maybe they should just miss the party and do something.. more fun~? D |
ColaVixen Inc chapter 1 . 10/15/2010 I'll review, just don't set Russia on me...I'd prefer to live a little longer...Anyways, good job! I know pretty much nothing about writing romance, so I can't offer any advice. :) Kudos! |
Saki chapter 1 . 9/26/2010 Awww, how cute :D |
OmangoOlemonadeO chapter 1 . 9/6/2010 *giggles* It's so adorable :D Su-san is kawaii :) Great writing. |
Strine chapter 1 . 8/22/2010 Must. Appease. Russia This story was lovely to read! (especially after reading angsty/sad SuFin fics -_-) The scene is well paced and flows nicely, the fluff isn't gagging and Berwald, Tino and Peter are all in character (except perhaps Berwalds speech, but i'm hardly going to complain, it's such an intrinsic part of this fandom it's to be expected) You're "romantic interactions" (for desperate want of better words) writing is excellent for a first time but does leave room for improvement, but that'll happen with practice. Excuse my lack of advice but i SUCK at writing romance I'm curious about the party now, maybe that could be another plot-bunny for later? XD |
keisan chapter 1 . 7/15/2010 Very cute. Much love. 3 |
Give me nomz chapter 1 . 7/12/2010 So cute! Even cuter than a kitten trying to eat a spaghetti noodle! |
insanelemon chapter 1 . 7/12/2010 This is so sweet and fun to read, I wish it was longer! |
Vivecka chapter 1 . 7/10/2010 aha that was very cute |
Emrysnyx chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 Ah, I love it. They're such a cute family! |
V. Copperhex chapter 1 . 7/8/2010 "Well he can't be my mama," - That is quite possibly the best retort I've heard in the matter xD Very cute and sweet story, I only wish there had been a few more vowels in Sweden's speech, because that he's vowel-free is actually just a fans' misunderstanding. Swedish IRL have a tendency to skip out on consonants and be a bit "lazy" in pronounciation, and fact is that Sweden is actually pretty clear in the webcomic, or clear and clear, he's a LOT clearer than what some fanworks give light of. |