Reviews for Help me With my Tie
Nihaoworld chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Heya! Kolkolkol... Review so russia doesnt kill me and because THIS WAS SO FREAKING CUTE! I WAS LIKE, AAAAHHHH SUFIN! THEY ARE SO CUTE TOGETHER!
Derp chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Awesome!
pocketfulofmumbles chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
I liked how you made the situation five times more awkward with Tino behind Berwald instead of in front. It makes perfect sense and was extremely adorable. Also, you write Peter perfectly.

Also also, I happened upon this almost six months ago now. This was the first SuFin fic I ever read. Thank you for getting me into this fandom with this lovely story. :)
AutumnLeafFall chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
great fanfic XD *trying to resist a bloody nose* yeah getting thoughts that are going ahead and that I also should not be thinking of at the moment but oh well
Sammy chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
ADORABLE! 3 Maybe they should just miss the party and do something.. more fun~? D
ColaVixen Inc chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I'll review, just don't set Russia on me...I'd prefer to live a little longer...Anyways, good job! I know pretty much nothing about writing romance, so I can't offer any advice. :)

Kudos!
Saki chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Awww, how cute :D
OmangoOlemonadeO chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
*giggles*

It's so adorable :D Su-san is kawaii :)

Great writing.
Strine chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Must. Appease. Russia

This story was lovely to read! (especially after reading angsty/sad SuFin fics -_-)

The scene is well paced and flows nicely, the fluff isn't gagging and Berwald, Tino and Peter are all in character (except perhaps Berwalds speech, but i'm hardly going to complain, it's such an intrinsic part of this fandom it's to be expected)

You're "romantic interactions" (for desperate want of better words) writing is excellent for a first time but does leave room for improvement, but that'll happen with practice. Excuse my lack of advice but i SUCK at writing romance

I'm curious about the party now, maybe that could be another plot-bunny for later? XD
keisan chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Very cute. Much love. 3
Give me nomz chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
So cute! Even cuter than a kitten trying to eat a spaghetti noodle!
insanelemon chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
This is so sweet and fun to read, I wish it was longer!
Vivecka chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
aha that was very cute
Emrysnyx chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Ah, I love it. They're such a cute family!
V. Copperhex chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
"Well he can't be my mama," - That is quite possibly the best retort I've heard in the matter xD

Very cute and sweet story, I only wish there had been a few more vowels in Sweden's speech, because that he's vowel-free is actually just a fans' misunderstanding. Swedish IRL have a tendency to skip out on consonants and be a bit "lazy" in pronounciation, and fact is that Sweden is actually pretty clear in the webcomic, or clear and clear, he's a LOT clearer than what some fanworks give light of.