The car salesman probably laughed them off the lot lol. Two people who look like teens proclaiming that they have a daughter who is old enough to drive? Lol.

Poor Rosalie :(

She missed Nessie's entire life. :(

How can Mr Nosy Edward be reading their thoughts? Eleazar would have informed Bella that she was a mind shield. It is irresponsible and VERY out of character for Bella not to be shielding her daughter and best friends.

It's wayyyyy too soon for the Cullen's to return to Forks. People would recognize them and would wonder why they haven't aged. This would draw way too much attention which, in turn, would draw the ire of the Volturi.

Why make her "Cullen?" The A-Holes betrayed and left her. Plus, Renesmee's parents weren't married, ergo she isn't a Cullen, so ur naming males no sense whatsoever.

I enjoyed it until it started going 18 I had to skip a few chapters...

I'm surprised that Edward didn't know what Tanya did, from her thoughts.

Ii think she should get pregnant as Edward missed out on Renesmee birth

Terrible writing

is that the end or not? update soon

Edward needing a haircut and shave... Kinda turned me off... Isn't he a vampire? Sorry...

I liked your story.
Found the change in imprints a little strange. But it works well in your stort.

I have one idea, get a beta (someone who will pre read your story) there are so many mistakes in your story.
English isn't my first language and it bothered even me.

Keep on writing.

Nice ending.

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS now what are you doing with rennesme and jake and landon ... Interesting.

Omg i cant believe that was the last chapter. Thank u for writing an amazing storie!

Super chapter I love it.